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my first two cards eva!


sliferman

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Your OCG (Official Card Grammar) needs some work. I suggest the link in my signature. It provides all the terms you need.

 

Your cards are also underpowered. Unicorn's first effect is redundant; why pay 200 Life Points to activate a Field Spell Card from your hand when you can pay 0 Life Points to do it?

 

Ryiokui is underpowered in its effect, but overpowered in its own attack power. Lower its attack power, and strengthen the boost it gives.

 

Otherwise, not bad.

 

7.2/10

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