Deity Mitsu Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 My entry into donpatch101's Angel Contest. I'd really like to know what you guys think because I'm not entirely sure about the balance. I wanna win this contest! :P Rate and comment please. "This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. This card cannot be destroyed while in face-up Attack Position. This card's DEF cannot be increased. If this card is in face-up Attack Position at the end of your Battle Phase, switch this card to face-up Defense Position." Sentence/Effect 1: Pretty self explanatory. Sentence/Effect 2: I added this in so that if your opponent can find a way to switch this card into Attack Position using a card effect then they can really take a chunk of your Life Points if they have a monster or monsters with high ATK on the field. Sentence/Effect 3: I added this so that it's really easy to destroy this card when revealed. Sentence/Effect 4: Keeps your Life Points safe unless your opponent controls a monster with the ATK-DEF damage difference effect. Tell me what you think. I'll make edits! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 cool 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Thanks dude. I was working on the effect for a good while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 I like it. Good pic and effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Thanks. Whew, thats one of the better card makers down. It's a relief :P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bazzabaz Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Very nice card, original and a long complicated effect, i like it!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Hahaha complicated in a "strategic" sense, or complicated as in "Too much to frigging read"? :P Either way, thanks bud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donpatch101 Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Hmm this card seems familiar. I hope it does well in the contest...although I cannot give it a rating. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Of course not haha. (If I can bribe you, PM me!) :P Just kidding. Thanks for the comment... familiar? I don't get it, but oh well! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly should be This card can attack your opponent directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Nice card, Mats. It seems pretty balanced and unique. The image is great, too. Good job. ;) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 I like the image; it comes from Magna Karta. Your OCG is solid. Stats and effect are balanced. I like that it has to go to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. I'm gonna give the "Full Offensive Angel" a 9.5/10. Great job! Keep up the good work! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 i believe its Magna Carta: Tears of Blood... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 good crd. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 i think that it is quite balanced. ^_^ however, i entered the same contest i think... but i would say that it is a 9/10 card. i wouldnt be surprised if this one beat mine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 I like it. Pretty original. Ok OCG. Nice effect. Good Balance. Solid 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 OCG fix: This card can attack your opponent directly. As long as this card remains in face-up Attack Position, this card cannot be destroyed. This card cannot gain DEF. If this card is in face-up Attack Position at the end of your Battle Phase, switch this card to face-up Defense Position. I think that being totally indestructible is a little overcooked, indestructible by battle would be better imo. Your OCG is a little out-dated, be sure to check DJ's thread. Also, you don't HAVE to conduct your Battle Phase, so maybe she should be switched in the Standby Phase. You need a Set ID to make it realistic and the name is somewhat odd for a low ATK monster. Hope I helped, peace out. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 great job there...7.85/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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