Guest Blud Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 EDIT: EDIT: Feel free to rate and/or comment, cause I'm not the best cardmaker here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamop CardMaker Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Hmm.. It's pretty good... I Think... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Good card. Nice potential. Minor OCG errors. Nothing too big. Maybe a bit overpowered, but since it loses 400 ATK each time the effect is applied, I guess it could balance out. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 I think it's cool. The pic would suit one of those Samurai cards too. I'm not sure but I think you don't capitalize "destroys", "monster", and "battle" in the third sentence. 4/5 Good job =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 You capitalize stuff way too much. >.< OCG fix (Master Rule OCG in []s): This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing[/or Releasing in Master Rule if you want] 3 Warrior-Type monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you gain 1000 Life Points, inflict 500 damage to your opponent, and this card loses 400 ATK. If this card is Tributed[/or Released in Master Rule if you want] for a[/n if you want to use Master Rule OCG because you say Advance Summon next] Tribute Summon[Advanced Summon in Master Rule OCG if you want], you can pay 1500 Life Points to return this card from your Graveyard to your hand. I think it's underpowered for a 3-trib monster. Big time. Up its ATK to 3800 or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Alright. I just have to say it. Special Summon has always been fine as Special Summon. Tributing has always been fine as Tributing. Let's not try being arrogant and changing them. Advance Summon and Releasing is NOT OCG. It's just something some people here made up, and thought it sounded better. All I'm saying is that if you wanna correct somebody, then use the correct words. Tribute and Special Summon. Just let me know if I'm wrong: OCG = Official Card Grammar + I've never read a card text in the TCG which said either "Advance Summon" and/or "Release". I've said my peace. Sorry to have done it in this forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Alright. I just have to say it. Special Summon has always been fine as Special Summon. Tributing has always been fine as Tributing. Let's not try being arrogant and changing them. Advance Summon and Releasing is NOT OCG. It's just something some people here made up' date=' and thought it sounded better. All I'm saying is that if you wanna correct somebody, then use the correct words. Tribute and Special Summon. Just let me know if I'm wrong: OCG = Official Card Grammar + I've never read a card text in the TCG which said either "Advance Summon" and/or "Release". I've said my peace. Sorry to have done it in this forum.[/quote'] YCM didn't make up Release and Advance Summon, The Duelist Genesis (the next set) uses it, and it will become OCG as soon as TDGS is released, mind the pun. And I had them in []s to show it's optionalness. Advance Summon is not the new Special Summon, it's the new Tribute Summon, you're new so not knowing this is perfectly fine, and Master Rule OCG is optional for now, but getting used to it helps prepare for later. I appreciate you ragin' on me, it's perfectly healthy, but it's good that you learn it now so beople won't be rippin' on ya. Proof: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Duelist_Genesis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Alright. My mistake. I apologize. All I was trying to say is that, since I haven't seen it on a card text (and I've been playing the TCG for many years), that it isn't correct OCG. Being optional, and accepted here is fine. But I choose not to use them on my card text. And until it comes out in the TCG, I plan to continue not using them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blud Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Ok, but use either Release or Tribute, not both. >_> So delete things in []s or delete the things beside the things in []s and delete the []s either works. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blud Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 :shock: GAAH!! I keep on forgeting to save my card. Sorry, Doom, I was really stupid! :shock: EDIT: Edited again >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 ROFL. Releasing/Tributing. JUST choose one of them not both of them. My advice is to use the more in-dated one...Releasing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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