woodmouse Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I don't own the pic. I thought it was cool and fit this card, so I used it.What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 OCG errors spewing out. Eww.Most Noticeable: Its Normal Summoned, not normal summoned...The pic...take out the lettering, its disturbing...very...Fix this/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Time for some help! Effect should be this: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 2 Water-Type monsters you control. When this card is destroyed in battle, select 1 "Umi" from your Deck, and then activate it. Then shuffle your Deck." I think this will work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woodmouse Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I used 01Alim's effect text. And removed the text from the bottom of the pic. Is it better now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Much better. ;) Keep up the hard work, Woodmouse. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Very nice editing. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Time for some help! Effect should be this: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 2 Water-Type monsters you control. When this card is destroyed in battle' date=' select 1 "Umi" from your Deck, and then activate it. Then shuffle your Deck." I think this will work. [b']Water is NOT a Type, it's an Attribute. Not in battle, by battle. Then isn't needed anywhwhere here, take it out the first time and change the last sentence which it's in.[/b] Here's an OCG fix, alim missed some stuff: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 2 WATER monsters you control. When this card is destroyed by battle, select 1 "Umi" from your Deck, and activate it. Your Deck is then shuffled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woodmouse Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I used the effect Doom Wraith wrote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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