capi Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Let me help you again: "When this card is sent to the Graveyard, destroy all cards on the field." Change it to Level 5 or 6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Raise the level of stars. Some OCG. Keep working on it. 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capi Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 what is OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Not bad. It's a little simple though, and your OCG is off. The image is great though. All in all, good job. ;) 5/10 EDIT: OCG stands for Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Official Card Grammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 what is OCG Official Card Grammar Learn it. Play the game, read the effect, see the Caps, etc.Fix it/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woodmouse Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Hmm. Not bad, not bad... Good card. 6/10, my rating is. (I tried to imitate Yoda from Star Wars :lol:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=51261Link to OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 THERE IS STILL PROBLEMS, COPY AND PASTE WHAT I WROTE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Don't forget the comma after Graveyard. And CAPITALIZE Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 A little underpowered, lower level to 4, good pic and effect, grammar problem, capitalize graveyard. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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