capi Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Not bad, but there are things that need to be worked on: 1) This needs to be a Beast, not a Spellcaster.2) Your OCG is better, but it is still a bit off. It could go: You can discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 700 damage to your opponent. 3) Stats are a bit too high for its effect. Lower its ATK a bit.4) Effect is basic and broken. There should be a limit on how many times the effect can be used in a turn.5) Card name is too plain. It needs to be a little more.....dramatic. You're getting a bit better. Keep at it. I'm gonna give this a 7.4/10. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 actually, more the what saturnpaladin said:1. an actual wrong section, unicorn is not real (make it more interesting and maybe it's not)2. effect too basic3. pic looks realisticmeh that's it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Add some more stuff to the effect. Maybe find another pic too. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 You have OCG Errors ^_^ ~ Atomix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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