End Of The Abyss Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Please Lock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 BUMP! I wish someone would Comment on my Fan-Fic....LoL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 O_O LOL at the end of the third chapter, but also Disgusting, but still 9/10 P.S. I think that Jspamax and SOS Haruhi might like to read this :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Good idea. The masters of pervertion must be PM'ed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Q_Q Lol... 9.676567/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Um....... *ahem* Typing one handed you know :P I love erotic fiction. Just give me aa moment..... Stupid Dog! I don't want to take you for a walk! *ahem* Yeah that was me using my other hand to... Um... Hold a dog lead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 WHAT DO YOU THINK? I NEED OPINION FROM MASTER OF PERVERSION! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I already said I loved it. You actually made me feel like I was sitting in the room with them. *Nasty Perverted thoughts* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Oops. Didn't see that.. P.S. That's a little gross...PM'ing the other Master of Perversion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Okay, I added Chapter 4. (Still Nasty thoughts, J-Max?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 OMG...the 4th chapter was just...*turns head 360*The end of Chap. 3...woah...Naked thighs...Oh noes...giggles/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I think there should be one of those RPs, except the members of the RP can change each other's Gender and Clothes, but a wise thing, just in case a pervert comes to the RP and Joins, rate it 17+ or something of that nature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bakura Vessal Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 i love it but.......... you need more pictures so i can see the boobs and stuff like that ^ _ ^also can i have a non censored vid of it? pleeeeaaassseee!!! overall 9.99999999999999/10 (you will get ten if you make it into a very VERY naughty video) ^ _ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Thanks, everyone. Chapters 5 and 6 and some pictures and on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 You are now officially warned for breaking the rules of Fanfiction. As most sane persons would say, there are kids on this site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I had a warning in this disclaimer. But just lock it, or delete it or whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Read the rules again: If you are warned three times, it will be locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I decide just to lock it anyways. It's bound to get locked, so save the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Ok. If that's what you want... ~Locked as requested~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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