OlegnaLP Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Mechanical Tyranno - Ancient Gear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiNoSaUrS Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 it kinda just looks like the gear golem with a pasted head of a tyrannolol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I rate it an 8/10.From a 10:-1 because it can't be Special Summoned. You need to Special Summon Fusions to get 'em out-0.5 because Machine/Dinosaur. It'd be better as a Machine / Fusion / Effect-0.5 because image needs improving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OlegnaLP Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Yes,I know that the image is too simple...but I lost the image that I made for the card . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 It's an interesting card. I like the image. The OCG is unrealistic - A Fusion Summon is considered a Special Summon. Lemme see if I can fix your OCG: "Ancient Gear Golem" + "Ultimate Tyranno"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. If this card is in Attack Position at the beginning of your Battle Phase, this card must attack all monsters on your opponent's field once each. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. The effect is very basic since it is just a combination of the effects of the monsters used to make it. It also needs to be one Type - Machine would be the better choice. All in all, not bad. I'm gonna give this card a 8.2/10. Pretty good idea. Keep up the good work. You'll get better over time. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OlegnaLP Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I forgot to write "exept by fusion summon"This is the new one: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 1. need a better image (-1p)2. machine/dinosaur ? chose one (-0.5p)3. "This card cannot be Special Summoned" -> "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon" (-0.5p)4. 3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwineRider Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 The update is better than the fisrt one. Great job! Now the only bug is the picture, I think. But thats not the main part. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Grammar problems, pic is okay, effect is a little overpowered. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Few OCG errorsLast part of the effect makes it a bit overpoweredPic ... not so great :neutral:6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 the image is too cheapi suggest you find another one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 um dude pic is .........lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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