TotalObelisk Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I may finish this set, I may not. I just had the urge to start making cards again since I haven't for so long... ((All images used are taken from Konachan.com and Deviantart.com and are credited to their various artists/creators)) [spoiler=set trivia]The title for the 'Sai-B0rg' set is taken from the anime 'Saishū Heiki Kanojo', or just 'SaiKano' (which means she the ultimate weapon). [spoiler=card trivia]The artwork here is uracil from 'Born Freaks' [spoiler=card trivia]This image is from the anime 'Saikono' or 'She the ultimate weapon' [spoiler=card trivia]This artwork depicts a character from 'xenosaga' _________________________________________ [spoiler=card trivia]This art depicts Kos-Mos from 'xenosaga' _________________________________________ [spoiler=card trivia]The artwork here is from Galge.com [spoiler=card trivia]The artwork here is Fureya from 'Chobits' [spoiler=card trivia]This artwork depicts a character from 'xenosaga' [spoiler=card trivia]Sai-B0rg 0M364 can be seen in this artwork As you can see there are some gaps which I will fill in over time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Wow. Really good cards. I like the idea. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingMorgortho Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Nice cards, all good effects and pics. 10/10 from me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 *bump* First page updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I strongly advise you to read my OCG sticky thread, i am seeing many many OCG / Grammar errors, cards with lots are usually placed in 'other cards'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 They are ok but they still have errors -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Hmmm, they are actually good cards, but I see alot of grammar/ocg errors, while I realise people dont care for that alot, you can't miss normal stuff such as a comma. The effects are somtimes simple, and good, or mid length, and great. I have heard alot of the great TO, and, well, you are good. I am glad to see you back, and I hope I get to see more from you soon ^_^ 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I strongly advise you to read my OCG sticky thread' date=' i am seeing many many OCG / Grammar errors, cards with lots are usually placed in 'other cards'.[/quote'] Thanks, I'll be sure to have a look... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I read the first two, and I noticed that they are titled SAI-B0RG, yet written Sai-Borg on the card. Also, what's up with using the same monster on your Fan-Fic Banner? xD Is it cause I finally surpassed my Fan-Fic inspiror in writing? XD I'll read the rest later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Oops, guess I missed that one out... And it's coincidence I swear, I had this planned since halfway into Third Legacy ^_^;... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Sai-B0rg X103: If you control a face-up "Sai-B0rg" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Special Summoned you can select 1 "Sai-B0rg monster you control. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the selected monster cannot be destroyed by battle. Sai-B0rg E176 This card cannot be Normal or Special Summoned except when you control 2 or more "Sai-B0rg" monsters. This card gains 800 ATK for each "Sai-B0rg" monster you control. PS: Only use one 0 as the ATK, not 4. I might actually recommend a single question mark as the ATK since it's determined by the effect. Sai-B0rg U843 This card gains the appropriate effect based on the number of "Sai-B0rg" monsters you control. -1: This card gains 500 ATK. -2: Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. -3 or more: When this card attacks, double the original attack of this card during the Damage Step only. Sai-B0rg M095 This card gains the following effect while you control another "Sai-B0rg" monster: -: Once per turn during your Battle Phase, select 1 monster your opponent controls. The selected monster loses 300 ATK for each Sai-B0rg monster you control. Sai-B0rg U5461 When this card is Normal or Special Summoned and it is the only monster you control, you can select 1 Level 4 or lower "Sai-B0rg" monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it. When this card is removed from the field, destroy the selected card. Sai-B0rg S41K If this card was Advance Summoned by Releasing a "Sai-B0rg" monster, double the ATK of this card. While you control another "Sai-B0rg" monster, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. Sai-B0rg J245 If you control only 1 face-up "Sai-B0rg" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in Defense Position. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select another "Sai-B0rg" monster as an attack target. Sai-B0rg G14 This card gains 300 ATK for each "Sai-B0rg" monster you control. Once per turn, you can pay half of your Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Sai-B0rg" monster from your Graveyard. Sai-B0rg S501 This card can only be Advance Summoned by Releasing 1 "Sai-B0rg" monster you control. While you control another "Sai-B0rg" monster, this card cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. Sai-B0rg 4lph4 When this card is Advance Summoned, if you control another "Sai-B0rg" monster, you can add 1 "Sai-B0rg B3T4" from your Deck to your hand. Sai-B0rg B3T4 When this card is Advance Summoned, if you control another "Sai-B0rg" monster, you can add 1 "Sai-B0rg 4lph4" from your Deck to your hand. Savage Werewolf When this Attack Position card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your hand. PS: Picture isn't good, white backgrounds are a bad thing. >_> Silver Werewolf This card loses 500 ATK during each of your End Phases. During your Standby Phase, you can Release this 0 ATK monster to SPecial Summon 1 Beast-Warior-Type monster from your hand. Snarling Werewolf When this card is Advance Summoned, this card gains ATK equal to the Level of the Released monster x 200. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 Beast-Warrior-Type monster you control. The selected monster gains ATK equal to the Battle Damage taken. Above are OCG fixes for many of your cards. They should be proper OCG. ^_^I have to go now, I'll try to help you some more as time permits, but I'm needed elsewhere, I hope I helped. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Wow! nice cards. Very nicely. Pics are fantastic. Original. I like the idea. OCG, but not alot of it. Awesome cards! I give you a 9.7/10!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 I've been through them and corrected the OCG on most of the cards, I'll do the rest later. Thanks for the help guys ^_6.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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