e_hero_captain_goldylocks Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 A few words need to be capitalized like 'Graveyard' and 'Special Summon' apart from that it looks like a pretty useful card.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e_hero_captain_goldylocks Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 i'm lazy ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Not bad. Image could be better though. Your OCG is a little off too. Otherwise, this looks like a pretty useful card. Keep up the good work. ;) I'll give this a 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Wasn't this a card already? w/e. Improve the OCG, and stop making E-Hero related cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e_hero_captain_goldylocks Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 what the heck is ocg? oriental card game? or what i dunno what needs to be improved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Official Card Grammar just some capitalization stuff. Pretty good idea. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e_hero_captain_goldylocks Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 im bad at grammer.............. its not my fault that im bad at literature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Eh, could be better. 6.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 im bad at grammer.............. its not my fault that im bad at literature Technically, yes it is; effort makes anything possible. There's an OCG thread on YCM, and you can reference real cards too, so there's no real excuse for bad OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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