Spire Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Here it is. I rushed it, so don't expect anything perfect. Please tell me if you spot any OCG errors, please. Thank you. [i don't own the pic] 0_o Well there you go.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 10/10! i love it! and the pic rocks!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Damn you boredom! well heres 2 minor OCG errors. In the DARK part you didn't put an apostrophe in Opponent's.In the LIGHT part it's Life Points (forgot to capitalize) Nice card thought 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 DAYM nice card man 10/10nice: pic,holo,and effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Damn you boredom! well heres 2 minor OCG errors. In the DARK part you didn't put an apostrophe in Opponent's.In the LIGHT part it's Life Points (forgot to capitalize) Nice card thought 9.5/10 Thanks for that. And thank you MCII and bucket 90. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Awesome card, I love it. Excellent art and a great effect. I often say boredom makes the best cards, and it's true :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Nice card. DM pointed out the OCG errors.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Dark effect is simply "Inflict 600 damage to your opponent." Check Fire Trooper etc for proof. Light effect should be "You gain 800 Life Points". Gain is used instead of increase in new ocg. sends a monster to the Graveyard should be "destroys a monster by battle'' since that's the only way it sends stuff to the Graveyard. one should be "1". these effects, depending on its attribute should be "the appropriate effect based on the Attribute of this card." Hope that helps. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Thanks Doom Wraith. Card edited. Hopefully there are no OCG errors left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 9.7/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Thank God for your boredom otherwise I will never such a good card coming from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Not bad. It is certainly good. Nothing wrong with it as I can see. OCG error: "in battle" must be "by battle". I've never seen UDE use "in battle". =/ 9/10. God, you were so close to 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Is it 10/10 now becasue I have edited it. Thanks Blood-D and to you Raviel Priest WYHE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 THAT PIC IS FROM an actual yu-gi-oh card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 THAT PIC IS FROM an actual yu-gi-oh card. NO IT ISN'T! IT IS FROM DEVIANTART.COM! I WOULD NEVER USE A PIC FROM A REAL YUGIOH CARD! GOOD DAY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 THAT PIC IS FROM an actual yu-gi-oh card. Really? Which one? It did remind of Axe Dragonute, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 As I said before, I didn't steal the pic from a real yugioh card. Heres the link.. http://pamansazz.deviantart.com/art/Moonshine-Dragon-92415293 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 kk. I believe you. That is one beautiful image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Thanks. Also thanks for the rate and the OCG help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 The image is the best thing about it :p....I wish this was a real card, it rox... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 thanks for showing your source dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATT110292 Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 10/10love the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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