01alim Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 [align=center]Hiya again! Hope you enjoy this card, and let me know if the pic used is overused, thanks.[/align](even though I added a custom background) I DO NOT OWN THE PIC[align=center]Thanks for viewing[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 It's pretty good, but a little overpowered for the person that is giving it away. 1800 Life Points? Someone could have a very good defense from direct attacks against a strong monster, say level 6 and up, and all their opponent would have to do is give this thing away and destroy it... I don't really know how to explain it very well, but maybe raising the cost and lowering the ATK a little? Up to you. Cool idea for an effect though. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Yo thanks, I'll see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Nice try, but it doesn't really work. "you" refers to the controller of the card. So, as you can see, its effect never kicks off, since it will never be on "your opponent's" side of the field. Try some different diction to obtain the desired effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Well...the title isn't bizzare. Nope...not catchy.The name. It. Bothers. Me. Its not. Catchy. Nope. Not. Catchy. At. All. How. About. A. Catchy. Name. To. It. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Nice try' date=' but it doesn't really work. "you" refers to the controller of the card. So, as you can see, its effect never kicks off, since it will never be on "your opponent's" side of the field. Try some different diction to obtain the desired effect.[/quote'] Oh thanks, never realised...Any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 haha Silencer, yeah ok I'll try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Don't double post. Also, it's good, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Not bad. It's more like a "You keep it!", "No you keep it!" situation.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Image doesn't fit well with background. Just saying...Like it. Very original. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Sorry about double post. Image doesn't fit background?Well, I think it looks alright...But oh well, can't change that now lol. And many thanks to all other raters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Not bad. It's more like a "You keep it!"' date=' "No you keep it!" situation.8/10[/quote'] Hee. I agree. The card is much better now. It would be moar fun it was a multi-trigger effect, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Oh thanks, but multi-trigger?What do you suggest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Multi-trigger. All you have to do is add the text, "This effect can be activated during either player's turn", somewhere. It would be awesome to watch this card go back and forth during a turn. It would even more amusing to listen to what the players are saying. "Here, a gift." *switch*"Oh, no; you're too generous. I couldn't possibly take this." *switch*"Please, I insist." *switch*"Goddammit stop giving it to me." *switch* And so on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Oh nice, awesome idea Bloo-D, thanks and it will be very funny. lol.*goes to edit* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 I like this card. I would use something like this. 9.8/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Glad you like it SaTuRnPaLaDiN, and thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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