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Scottbenton

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These cards are horible[no offense] I mean it. You cannot put a discription on a effect monster. It all needs work

 

I agree. Believe it or not...these are the worst cards I have seen by far today. Bird Token? Exodia on a pic with a black bg? The pics are horrendous and the cards need re-working.

Major Fix them/10

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Guest Welche

There is this thing called OCG or Official Card Grammar. There is a thread called grammar or something, I would read it, but these are your first cards, if you want, i could PM you my very first?

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As bad as the others say, don't let that put you down. Check the Main Threads, look around for inspiration. Check out www.yugioh.wikia.com as there is no such thing as flying. That's Pokemon. Its called Winged Beast. But still, on the positive side, you are good at writing descriptions for the Normal Monsters.

3/10

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