Jericho Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Disclaimer: I do not own the art used on this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I have one question: how the devil do you tribute from your hand? That should be "send 1 "Rude Kaiser" from your hand to the Graveyard." And it is Beast-Warrior-Type. ;) 7.8/10. -Kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I have one question: how the devil do you tribute from your hand? That should be "send 1 "Rude Kaiser" from your hand to the Graveyard." And it is Beast-Warrior-Type. ;) 7.8/10. -Kale 1) It says field, Kale. F-I-E-L-D. FIELD! 2) I typed it up in a hurry. It says Beast-Warrior-Type but I forgot to hyphen and Cap between Warrior and Type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Rude Kaiser". By sending 1 Beast- or Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Rude Kaiser" from your Graveyard." 9.4/10 Original, great card. The problem is that RK is a 5-star 1800 normal monster. Fail. :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 oh, sorry, I swear I saw hand before... >.> Updated rating: 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Rude Kaiser". By sending 1 Beast- or Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard' date=' destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Rude Kaiser" from your Graveyard." 9.4/10 Original, great card. The problem is that RK is a 5-star 1800 normal monster. Fail. :S[/quote'] 1) So you're basically saying all that is wrong with the OCG is the second sentence? 2) Yea, but this card being built upon that card makes up for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 1) The second sentence should say "cannot be Special Summoned except by".The third sentence doesn't need "Type monster" next to "Beast-".The fourth and last sentence needs "and sent to the Graveyard" after "destroyed". :S 2) I never said your card was bad. RK is terrible, though.Still, I commend you on your originality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 1) The last sentence also has an OCG error; missing "and sent to the Graveyard". 2) I never said your card was bad. RK is terrible' date=' though.Still, I commend you on your originality.[/quote'] 1) It's not supposed to. If Macro Cosmos, for example, is on the field and you or you opponent activates Torrential Tribute, and you have a "Rude Kaiser" in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon said "Rude Kaiser". 2) I'm all about originality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 good card there...8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh Joker Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 *GASP* you did make a card to have a reason to run Rude Kaiser nice job ;) and I see no OCG error's.9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Trade-In food. Probably all I would use it for. Idea is good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 It seems a bit overpowered. Try lowering the ATK and DEF a bit. The idea is good.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 OCG Errors, remember that it's now realised Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 OCG Errors' date=' [b']remember that it's now realised[/b] is that all the OCG errors? please feel free to point out any others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Grammar problem, good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Very nice. Gives power to Beast-Warriors and Rude Kaiser. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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