Yogg-Saron Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 [align=center]Enjoy and Comment! More coming soon![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Its great! good pics. good ideas 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Thanks Welche! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Nice set. Love the idea. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Wow, you guys made me miss an OCG error on Acsis. Fix'd it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Aquadark should be 1400 ATK. Otherwise, great job. 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Aquadark should be 1400 ATK. Otherwise' date=' great job. 9.4/10[/quote']Why? If it needs to be 1400 ATK, so does Slate Warrior :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Well, Slate Warrior doesn't say "If -such-and-such- is on the field, Special Summon it from your Graveyard face-down, then flip it face-up." I'm just saying; a free 2400 from your Graveyard seems a bit iffy. I'd put a restriction on it, or lower its ATK. After all, other revival cards need some sort of cost or restriction put on them to work properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I like. Nice images and effects. Keep up the hard work. ;) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I love em ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fairy Knight King Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 I love these cards it's a great way to add reputation to the sea serpents which never get attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Sea Serpents of Acsis - Aquadark: If you control "Acsis" you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your End Phase. I'm not quite sure what you mean by next. I think this card could have somewhat of a balance issue. With constant revival and 1900 ATK with 2400 when boosted, I'd add a cost to the revival or lower its stats to below 1000. Sea Serpents of Acsis - Altia This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Altia's Summoning". When this card is Ritual Summoned, you can add 1 "Acsis" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. If this card attacks, change the battle positions of all face-up monsters on the field, except "Sea Serpent of Acsis - Altia". This one seems fair. ^_^ Remember, even though Defense Position and Attack Position use capital letters, battle position does not. Sea Serpent King of Acsis - Altia's Master This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Sea Serpent of Acsis - Altia" you control. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any card effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, if "Acsis" is on the field you can Special Summon 1 Sea Serpent-Type monster from your Graveyard. I like this one, nice job. ^_^ It's effect is fitting for what you have to do to summon it. Serpent Nightmare LV4 This card is unaffected by the effects of Effect Monsters. You can Release this face-up card during your Draw Phase to Special Summon 1 "Serpent Nightmare LV6" from your hand or Deck. Again, I'm unsure of what you mean by next. I like this card, great image! ^_^ Serpent Nightmare LV6 When the effect of an Effect Monster is activated, you can discard 1 card to negate the effect and destroy the Effect Monster. During the End Phase of a turn in which you activated this effect, you can Release this card to Special Summon 1 "Serpent Nightmare LV9" from your hand or Deck. Nicely done, very characteristic of LV monsters. ^_^ Don't use 1st Edtion in your circulation as you'd need a golden prismatic corner stamp, which your card lacks. Also, the card maker makes circulation block capitals, so 1st Edition becomes 1ST EDITION. Serpent Nightmare LV9: This card cannot be Notmal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Serpent Nightmare LV6". Your opponent cannot Summon Effect Monsters. Very good. I have nothing more to critique. ^_^ Altia's Summoning: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Sea Serpent of Acsis - Altia". You must also Release monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 8 or more. Check Black Magic Ritual for proof of this new Ritual Spell Card wording. A basic Ritual Spell, nicely done. The image goes well with Altia. ^_^ Acsis: All WATER monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. When a Sea Serpent-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can discard 1 card to negate the attack. Good job. ^_^ Although it would obsolete Umiruka, so putting a rarity on it would be a good plan. Although I probably couldn't tell if you did as Spell Cards look the same in Common, Rare, Super Rare, and Secret Rare. Ultra Rare would be a good rarity. Above are effects with wording similar to that of the recent sets. Also, Sea Serpent is not a hyphenated Type. The only hyphenated Type is Beast-Warrior. These were well done, although the effects were a little short. Short effects are a little more realistic, but lack the grandeur of large effects. So try to shoot for large effects. Hope that helps. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Omg, member of the year above me. You are very helpful. ADDED NEW CARDS, RATE AND COMMENT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 nice cards i love them 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 OCG looks good to me. They appear balanced. Some pictures have been used before. I still like these. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 great cards! Lv 9 would really mess with my caius deck! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Thanks for the comments guys! Added new cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Bump, no one likes to comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millenium Mike Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Wow! Most of the pics are great, the effects are awesome and the cards have perfect synergy!10/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Thanks for the comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Bump, added 2 new cards. Rate and Comment!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Bump. New cards coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nxtium Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 One word. WOW! The pictures look real, the names are cool, the effects are awesome, and there are a lot of cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aashar Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 those are cool cardsman ship dont hate 10/10 on him he got skills you don't got it unless your better than him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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