Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Mah New Ritual Card is here and like it said above it made me win 1st place in that ritual contestSome of you may have seen the pic of my Ritual Spell Card in another card i made so i used it here again ^_^heres Mah RiTuAL CArD Ritual Spell Card[/center]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Shining Reflector Gaze". Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your hand, it is destroyed during the End Phase. When a face-up LIGHT Monster you control destroys a monster by battle, this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. You can Release 1 LIGHT monster you control to place 1 Light Counter on this card. You can remove 3 Light Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Mentor Token" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) in Defense Position. "Mentor Tokens" cannot be Released for an Advance Summon. When a "Mentor Token" is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower LIGHT monster from your hand; all LIGHT monsters on the field gain 500 ATK. Disclaimer: I do not own the artwork of my cardOld and New OCG was used like Release-TributeMah cards contains a Ritual Spell and Monster Card^_^Hope You Liked Mah Ritual Card- CMY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destruction10 Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 nice card(as usual) Chaos Master Ygo ^_^ 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 thanks destrucion10 ^_^ Everyone:Please Comment and Rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Nice, but if the ritual is "Black Hole Solar Eclipse" then how does the monster have anything to do with light? Maybe dark would be better. For the effect, 8.5 / 10. Good job ^_^ d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Ill think of a better nameAnd thanks for the rating ^_^EDIT: name Changed ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 *Stares at it* So this is the card that beat me eh? Very nice. I love lengthy effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Well you still came 2nd ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 nice card some errors but nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 What are the OCG Errors so i can change itAnd thanks for the rating ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 it says 8 stars and it has 9,the ritual has a diff name than the monster says Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 thanks i forgot to change that ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Awesome, I like them ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Nice cards. The monster seems a bit underpowered to me though :neutral:9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Now this is cool, I see how it won. Even the ritual spell has an appropriate pic, and a good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millenium Mike Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Very nice card but the effect is so complicated you would need a seperate phase to figure out all of this cards effects. Maybe if you shortened the effects this card would be less overpowered and much less confusing. The artwork isn't that great either. 6.5/10! Good, but not great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mou100 Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 nice cards 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 thanks guys ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Ill think of a better nameAnd thanks for the rating ^_^EDIT: name Changed ^_^ Well first of all' date=' the wording on Ritual Spell Cards was changed to the following: "This card is used to Ritual Summon "[Name of Ritual Monster Here']". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal [Level of Ritual Monster] or more." So in your case, it'd be: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Levitus, God of Light". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 8 or more. Example to show new wording: If you want to use the fancy new 5ds wording, you can also use Release instead of Tribute. As for your Ritual Monster: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Shining Reflector Gaze". Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your hand, it is destroyed during the End Phase. When a face-up LIGHT Monster you control destroys a monster by battle, this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. You can Release 1 LIGHT monster you control to place 1 Light Counter on this card. You can remove 3 Light Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Mentor Token" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) in Defense Position. "Mentor Tokens" cannot be Released for an Advance Summon. When a "Mentor Token" is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower LIGHT monster from your hand; all LIGHT monsters on the field gain 500 ATK. Also, your Ritual Spell needs "EN" at the start of the second part of your Set ID, and your Ritual Monster lacks a Set ID. Using 2 different types of wording (5ds and non-5ds is unrealistic, so I'd advise against it. Your Ritual Monster would be better off without that person with the book in it. I hope that helps, if you need further help, please send me a Private Message. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 thanks Void for the OCG fix ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destruction10 Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 thanks destrucion10 ^_^ Everyone:Please Comment and Rate Your Welcome ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Phoenix® Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Very nice. I love lengthy effects. I agree' date=' nice card dude!!^_^[/color'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 i like making long effects to make the card interesting that's why i do it and thanks cardcreator444 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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