01alim brings you: Ramirez - the Angel of Resurrection ANOTHER MUST SEE

[01alim]

The card which battled it's way into the Semi's in a contest

 

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can pay 200 Life Points to Special Summon that monster to your opponent's side of the field in face-up Defense Position and place 1 Control Counter on it. That monster's battle position cannot be changed except with a card effect. During your Standby Phase, increase your Life Points by an amount equal to half the original DEF of each monster with a Control Counter. If a monster with a Control Counter is destroyed, you take damage equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can pay 200 Life Points to Special Summon that monster to your opponent's side of the field in face-up Defense Position and place 1 Control Counter on it. That monster's battle position cannot be changed except with a card effect. During your Standby Phase, increase your Life Points by an amount equal to half the original DEF of each monster with a Control Counter. If a monster with a Control Counter is destroyed, you take damage equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

 

I do not own the picture used for this card, I only done the holoing

[TR_Headshot]

Sweet card and I love how fair it is! 9/10

[Lucas Maximus]

I like. Well balanced. Nice image and effect. G'job, 01alim. ;)

 

9/10

[01alim]

9/10s so far, great, and thanks guys!

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Raise it's level to 9 and at the end it should say "you take damage equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster"

Not bad aside from that.

8/10

[01alim]

Ok thanks demented!

[Silencerleader]

OH...Silencer likey kinda.

What bugs me is the bottom right of the pic. After starring at it for 5 minutes and 32 seconds...well...you'll see ;).

Balanced though. :D

[Void Old]

Here's a wording fix:

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can pay 200 Life Points to Special Summon that monster to your opponent's side of the field in face-up Defense Position and place 1 Control Counter on it. The battle positions of monsters with Control Counters cannot be changed, except with a card effect. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, you gain Life Points equal to the combined original DEF of all monsters on the field with Control Counters on them. If a monster with a Control Counter is destroyed, you take damage equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

 

Also, the optional effect seems bad for you more than it's good for you. I don't see why the owner would use that effect, it's drawbacks outweigh its one good point, the Life Point gain.

 

Other than that, it's great. ^_^

[01alim]

OH...Silencer likey kinda.

What bugs me is the bottom right of the pic. After starring at it for 5 minutes and 32 seconds...well...you'll see ;).

Balanced though. :D

Bottom right? What's wrong? Were you talking about the picture, or the whole card itself?

Either or, I see nothing wrong, please fill me in.

:(

 

Thank you Void!

[Atomix]

It's a good gambling card ^_^

 

~ Atomix