Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 I put some thought into this card, my grandpa recently passed away, and he loved the color green, so... — Commonly represents —nature' date=' [b']growth[/b], hope, youth, sickness, health, go, Islam, environmentalism and envy — Shades —Army green-Asparagus-Bright green-British racing green-Camouflage green -Celadon-Chartreuse-Yellow-green-Emerald-Fern green-Forest green-Gray asparagus-Green-Green yellow-Harlequin-Hunter green-Islamic green-Jade-Jungle green-Kelly green-Lime-Lime green-Moss green-Myrtle-Office green-Olive-Olive drab-Pear-Persian green-Pigment green-Pine green-Sea green-Shamrock green-Spring green-Spring bud-Tea green-Variations of green*Bolded is what I used* He also was in the marines and army, thus the Warrior-Type! And Finally, the card!This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 Level 3 or lower monster you control and 1 Level 4 or lower monster your opponent controls. Once per turn you can place 1 Health Counter on this card (max 6). During your Opponent's Draw Phase you gain Life Points equal to the number of Health Counters on this card x300. Once per turn during your opponent's turn your opponent can place 1 Ill Counter on this card (max 6). During your Draw Phase you lose Life Points equal to the number of Ill Counters on this card x300. This card gains ATK equal to the number of Health or Ill Counters on this card x100. If this card has 10 or more Health and Ill Counters on this card, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. Rate/Hate/Comment/Feed Pie!-Ryan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Sorry to hear about your loss. Really nice card, though. You are missing commas in some areas (like after Phase and turn). Other than that, it's really good. 10/10 just because there was a lot of love and work involved. Great card, dude! This is one to be proud of. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 thanks, but what would your normal rate be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Good one.. while you are at it, why not make a card that turns life points into hit points? ;) [takes credit for idea] You are improving, young padawan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Honestly: Raise its Level, up its ATK and DEF, comma errors This would get about a 8.8/10 normally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 there is a reason for the low level, he was young when he was in the army/marines, and that was his pride years, he would brag about that so much, he loved that. Thank you, commas are my weakness! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 And about the whole 'he' thing, look closely at the chest of the knight, I think that he/she is female, but I could be mistaken. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 i know, but it wasnt the image just the idea of the card :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 I like the idea of the card to match the image. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 thanks, i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Sorry for your loss but nice card ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 this is a sweet card 8.9999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Not bad. I think it should be lvl 4 though. :neutral:8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 what is the differemce in gameplay between 3 and 4 stars? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 really horrible effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 0_0 explain please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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