Spirit Reaper guy Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 This is my first card, umm i think its pretty good, tell me what you think, theres nothing really special about it it just came to me EDIT: with updated ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Take out the lettering and add a bg.Either that or get a better pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Idea=Ok but ATK is overpowered=6/10Pic=You could do better=5/10OCG=Inbetween good & bad=4/10 Overall=OK=5.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit Reaper guy Posted July 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 ocg is spot on, but yea idk how to take out the lettering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 Cool image. OCG is a bit off. I think it should be worded: When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can pay 1000 Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by half the original ATK of the destroyed monster. During your 3rd Standby Phase after this card's effect was activated, this card's ATK is returned to normal. This seems very overpowering. I would change this effect so that it wears off during the Standby Phase of your NEXT turn. That way, it balances out by not having an overpowered monster. So, it could be worded as such: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can pay 1000 Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by half the original ATK of the destroyed monster until your next Standby Phase. It's an interesting idea. Not bad for your first card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit Reaper guy Posted July 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 you always were one to correct my ocg -MCII yea.. il change itps. thats my bro -Spirit Reaper Guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted July 31, 2008 Report Share Posted July 31, 2008 What is the name. Any meaning? The ocg Could sorta-kinda-maybe be better. Try harder. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 The pic would be awesome without the wording in it.Effect is ok.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 Take the wording out of the pic and give it a background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 not bad kinda good.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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