Youko-San Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Tell me any ideas for cards you may have, and if I need to change anything. I'm basing these cards on the face that most Pyro Monsters inflict direct damage to your opponent's Life Points, and destroying their monsters. 08/02/08Nerfed Fire DemonAdded Stallion of FireAdded Wolf of FlamesFlame Wielding Robot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Hmm... the correct effect would be: If this card is the only monster you control, your opponent must pay 500 Life Points and discard 1 card from his/her hand to attack.But it's a bit overpowered, so I could suggest lowering the ATK/DEF a bit ^_^;Nice though - I'll give 7.5 / 10. Good luck with your set ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DGoser Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 My suggested wording borrows from the card "Gravekeeper's Servant": If you control no other monsters, unless your opponent pays 500 lifepoints and selects and discards 1 card from his/her hand, he/she cannot declare an attack. Also, I have to ask, with only 1 monster with 2700 attack on the field, what exactly would your opponent be attacking with? The only things that immediately come to mind are DMoC, DaD, or Judgment Dragon, and two of those cards would destroy Fire Demon before attacking anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 you don't get it do you,DGoser.They have to be balanced.a card with 3400 attack shouldn't have a super powerful effect.that's why people make cards like they do.it's called balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 It's a powered up "Gravekeeper's Servant" in the form of a monster. Pretty neat. Image could be better. ~Spirit of Touma~ fixed OCG problems. Stats are okay. Not bad for a first card. 9.2/10. Keep up the good work. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 uberpowered effect 6/10 your background is too plain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Picture could be better. Not too bad though. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Pic could be better. But since its your first, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Pretty good for your first, crop your pic a little more to remove the sig., 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youko-San Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Added More cards as well as nerfed Fire Demon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Pics have plain-ish backgrounds.Effects are kinda simple.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youko-San Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 I know they are boring, however I do not know how to change the background. If I could I would, but thanks for the comments everyone. I will continue to add more monsters until I have completed this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youko-San Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 hhmm... i like the cards. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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