Gammind Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 1st: Good Card2nd: OP, Look at Grave Squirmer + this is a Zombie so OP-er.3rd: Good Card4th: WAY OP Look at Lightsworn.5th: Okay Card, Michizure for S/T6th: Good Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nxtium Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 You forgot to capitalize a lot of words. All of the cards are not overpowered except, as Xemba mentioned, the 4th one. You could "Yata-Lock" your opponent in a fiercer but not easier way than "Yata Garasu"; if your opponent keeps losing cards, and the cards he/she draws are useless against the too powerful card, he/she will lose Life Points quick. But pretty good for a new member. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Cool images. Not bad for a new member. Keep up the good work. Make sure to check out DJ Osiris' OCG (Official Card Grammar) Thread for OCG advice. 9.1/10 8) Oh, and make sure to add a DISCLAIMER that you don't own the images. The mods WILL get you for this!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Valkyrie Warrior is more Dark Armed Dragon abuse. These are pretty good. Like SaTuRnPaLaDiN said, check out the OCG Thread. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DGoser Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 1st: Overpowered Skull Lair (that guard was errata'd for a reason).2nd: Overpowered Grave Squirmer (already mentioned).3rd: Balanced. Chip off the 50 ATK.4th: WAY Overpowered in Lightsworn (already mentioned), basically 3 more copies of Judgment Dragon with discard power.5th: Situational. More often than not, your opponent will be targeting this card and you won't be able to use it because of it's wording.6th: I would call this one a tad overpowered because there is no payment cost. Put a beater on the field and then combo this to wipe out your opponent's monsters- not very balanced. Most OCG errors involve capitalization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 You spelled Pestilence wrong.Some other errors in thereMost pics are fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 There are some errors. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Not bad, 7.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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