Mr. Hyde Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunts064 Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 every card is OCG...check and redo each cards grammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Once you improve on your grammar, and the quality of your pictures, you cards will be about perfect! Keep up the good work! :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted August 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 idk what you guys are talking about when you say my grammar is bad?:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 We're talking about capitalizing the first letter of each sentence, and adding to the correct punctuation to your effects. Things like that. Also, you could decrease the levels on some of your cards, especially the last card. If you need help, just private message me. :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted August 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Oh thanks ill remember that thanks:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunts064 Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 I wont redo every card u made but Ill take a swing at the first one for u... Digivice Equip to a Data Type Monster. Seach your Deck for a Champion Type Monster. Tribute 1 Data Type Monster for the Champion Type Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunts064 Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Digivice (Quickplay) Tribute 1 Data Type Monster to Seach your Deck for a Champion Type Monster and Special Summon it to your side of the field. This would work alot better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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