Infernalhero Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 I know that Crystal Beasts don't have much love in dueling,at least not here, but I made a new CB because I think it could be good in a Rainbow Dragon Deck.If not that it has a good ATk at least.Crystal Beast Diamond Wolf:Once per turn by decreasing this card's ATK points by 500,this card gains the name of one of your Removed From Play "Crystal Beast" Monster(s).If this effect is used this turn it is Switched to Defense position.If this card is destroyed as a Result of Battle you can put it in the Spell and Trap Card Zone.When this card is removed from the field Removed From Play instead.(This card is not counted as a "Crystal Beast" able to summon "Rainbow Dragon" unless it has been named a different "Crystal Beast".Fixed and used pic from Deviantart,instead of google. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CatJillian Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 NICE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 There is a better picture for Diamond Wolf out there, just search DeviantArt for "Crystal Beast Diamond Wolf" and you'll see. There are OCG errors, but I cannot tell you them, I suck at fixing OCG. EDIT: There you go, better picture for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 The pic needs work, seems okay, change to EARTH monster. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Do you have to be a member to use Deviantart art,or can I use it and say it's there's? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Do you have to be a member to use Deviantart art' date='or can I use it and say it's there's?[/quote'] you can use it, just put a disclaimer. you need to work on your OCG a bit. ;) 7/10 -Kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 New Beast,added sub-type.I need to know if it's any good and if I should get rid of the Sub Type.I actually might want to make more Gem Sub-types so please rate and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 great start for a new member you have a good future ahead of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 I dont like the pic of the dragon has no resemblance of a crystal beast 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Diamond Wolf looks very realistic,but not Jade Dragon though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 I found you a good pic for CB Jade Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 *looks at picture* looks more of a dinosaur monster to me. BTW, can I use that pic for a card. I see potential in it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Sure its not mine go ahead*Adds Raviel Priest WYHE to friends List* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 The second pic could be better, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 When this card is removed from the field Removed From Play instead.(This card is not counted as a "Crystal Beast" able to summon "Rainbow Dragon" unless it has been named a different "Crystal Beast". Not a bad effort for a new member, but few OCG errors:1 - decrease the ATK of this card by 500, instead of lowering this card's ATK points by 500.2 - If you use this effect, not If this card uses this effect this turn3 - Defence Position, not Defence Mode4 - You can just copy the proper wording for If this card is destroyed as a Result of Battle you can put it in the Spell and Trap Card Zone. from the current Crystal Beast monsters.5 - When this card is removed from the field, remove it from play instead, not When this card is removed from the field Removed From Play instead..hope this post helps with the errors above. and your Jade Dragon (all be it a bad pic) is pretty much right, except if it is Sycnhro Summoned, it should be a Synchro Monster. You can change the card into a Synchro card on the CardMaker. Cards Rating: 6.5/10 (due to all the errors) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Yeah Made that was an accident on the Synchro.Thanks for the comments and i'll get to work on the errors.But could you guys tell me what you think on the Sub-type "gem" for a set.Made the changes to the cards,I liked the pic you found Zack12354 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Well your Diamond Wolf seems to arouse a question here. Can you synchro summon Crystal Beasts in S/T zone. *Goes to check ruling...* http://yugioh.tcgplayer.com/db/article.asp?ID=2050 that's all I could find, not sure if that's official. Anyways CB Diamond Wolf is OP for another 2000 attack 4 star monster. Also, CB Jade Dragon is UP as Stardust Dragon is usually the better choice for an 8 star synchro monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Could you explain how I could make CB Jade Dragon more balanced,because I thought that that was fairly balanced.And on Crystal Beast Diamond Wolf what could I do to make it less powered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Well you could lower Diamond Wolf's attack by 100Also for Jade Dragon, when it is destroyed by a card effect you can draw 2 cards and make it's attack 2800. Really shifts it up to a nice realistic card that will be likeable. Secondly, make Jade Dragon not count for the Rainbow Dragon count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Made the Fixes,and again can people please comment on the Sub-Type "Gem" for a set and maybe throw out ideas as to the rules to using them.Jade Dragon is a "Gem" just to Say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 I used diamond wolfs pic before. It's cool. ^_^I agree with Spire about the second pic though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Bump,also need new ideas for Crystal Beasts.Please give me some Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 I love Diamond Wolf's pic. Jade Dragon doesn't really look like a Crystal Beast. DW 9/10Jade Dragon 7.5/10 (for the Pic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 New Cards and I fixed Crystal Beast Jade Dragons Pic,hope ya like em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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