DrizzNip Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Here is my newest card[the ledendary dragon ra. it is not mt photo. i looked up ra images. if you think something is wrong tell me. or drop a pm your choice. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Light type Monsters over Lv.2. This card lets you Special Summon 1 Legendary Token, that can only be used for Tributes for Light type Monsters. The Atk of the card is by Tokens. For each Token played it has 500 Atk per Token. For Dfe it uses Tributes. 400 Dfe per Tribute. This card Can't be destroyed by Battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 First of all, the idea isnt very original. OCG also needs work. I'll PM the corrections within the next 24 hours as it is 1:30 AM where I live and I need my sleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 LIGHT, ATK, DEF, LIGHT is not a type, keep trying, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 OCG is non-existant, you need to look at the OCG Thread at the top of this section and remake this card. Card is Underpowered; the Max ATK it can have (by my interpretation of the effect) is 500 (unless your opponent has some too), for this card is be worth 3 Tributes it would need at least 8 Tokens on the field. Pic is grainy and if the monster is not a Divine-Beast, it cannot be Divine Attribute. Card Rating: 0/10 (underpowered, pathetic creation even if it can't be destroyed) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrizzNip Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 OCG is non-existant' date=' you need to look at the OCG Thread at the top of this section and remake this card. I can't even rate this, since the effect doesn't make any sense to me. Pic is grainy and if the monster is not a Divine-Beast, it cannot be Divine Attribute. Card Rating: ??/10[/quote'] goldshine dragon is going to help me still i wonder how it dosent make sence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Went back and read it again, read previous post for changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrizzNip Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 i have added slifer now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Pics are blurry, need to be original, overpowered, grammar problems. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 very unoriginal.. blurry pics.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 ocg errors its DEF not dfe err 4/10 for trying at least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Where's Obelisk. He's the coolest God of all three! I do like the alternate art on Ra though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Spelling, GrammAr, Official Card GrammAr, Concept, Originality. when you come up with cards, always consider those things, alright? ^_^ as of now, you havnt done much of any of them. so... i am forced to rate this a... 2/10 sorry, mate. try again next time. :| welcome to YCM! ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Unorignally Unoriginal. Tounge Twist lolz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Not good, sorry, 2.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Unoriginal, pics blurry, bad OCG4/10 :neutral: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Bad Art, Bad OCG, your idea is not original, I did the same thing last month. ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riku final keyblademaster Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 thats kool on 100 check out my kingdom hearts thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 3/10 for the effort. keep trying! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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