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Zaca

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Pictures could be better. First card is overpowered, there are over 50 Level 4 or lowered monsters whose combined ATK and DEF can reach 3200 or more. The 2nd card is interesting, but maybe overpowered. easily do 2000-2500 damage, and a Monster shouldn't be destroyed, Exxod should. Needs re-wording as well.

 

4/10 for 1st

5/10 for 2nd

 

with changes the rating would increase.

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There are few grammar mistakes, and the wording stinks. They're both a little overpowered. For the wording, I give it a 2/10, but I've seen worse. Try something like this:

 

You can only activate this card when you have "Exxod, Master of The Guard in your hand or deck. When your opponent attacks, if the attacking monster's ATK is less than 4000, special summon 1 "Exxod, Master of The Guard" from your hand or deck to take the place of the current target. Destroy "Exxod, Master of the Guard" at the end of the Damage Step.

 

For Combiner, try something like this:

 

Combine the ATK and DEF of 1 monster on the field until the End Phase.

 

Make sure you use ATK and DEF, not defence and attack.

["Defence" is spelled "defense."]

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