The Great Beasts(NOT GODS!!!)

[Infernalhero]

1 DARK-Type Tuner Monster+1 Dark Armed Dragon

1 DARK-Type Tuner Monster+1 Dark Armed Dragon

This card can only be Synchro Summoned.When this card is Synchro Summoned Successfully it gains 100 ATK points for every DARK-Type Monster on the Field, and Graveyard.While this card is on the Field no other monster can Attack other than this monster and 1 chosen by your Opponent.Each Turn you must pay 1000 Life Points,if this is not possible this card is destroyed.

1 Tuner Monster+1 or more none Tuner Monsters

This card can only be Synchro Summoned.When this card Destroys an Opponent's Monster your Opponent Discards the Top 5 Cards of His Deck(This is Not Optional).You Must Pay 800 Life Points if you can not do this Destroy this card.When this card is Removed from the field both you and your Opponent Send the Top 7 Cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.

[Cless Alvein]

These are awesome! 10/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Take the wording out of the first pic. (Lower right corner)

second pic (Lower left corner)

8/10

[Infernalhero]

Don't Know How to do that without ruining the pic

[Infernalhero]

bump

[Atomix]

You need to get the text out of the pics.

[Huntar!]

Eh.. Not bad at all for a new member.. Good job

[.:|Fallen|:.]

apart from the text there ok

[Cless Alvein]

haha! they ARE good!

[Infernalhero]

Ok,how do you get the Text out without ruining the Pic.

[Bunter Dwayne]

To get the text out of the pic, right-click the pic and go edit. Then use the tools to cut out a bit. Anyway, nice cards, 8/10.

[Tom199502]

good but when armageddon crimson beast is destroyed it shouldnt be 15 cards thats way too many if you ask me. make it like ten

[Fiffer]

whoa..... 10/10 aswome cards...

[Guest setojim]

great cards. the armed dragon needs some fixing on text. it needs to be "As long as this card remains face-up, negate the effects of all spell, trap, and other monsters." also, your just askin Dark armed dragon to get banned. lol. with the current format, DAD is so evil.

[N00B Hunter]

goodness... a little Synchro-Happy aren't we?

Your first card takes "DAD", one of the greatest monsters in the metagame by far, and completely messes with its tactics. "DAD" is all about field control (total monster wipeout, in fact -- it should be banned). Your monster is everything aggro, with the whole only-one-monster-can-attack, the 200-ATK-per-DARK-Monster, and the Effect Lockdown ability... so I see a complete strategy flip.. not so smart, and hard to make a deck around.

 

Not only that, but its effect-negation ability negates all of its own effects. No LP payment, no ATK gain, no nothing... along with all the OCG errors, it seems you didn't put much effort into writing the effect. So what pay is "DAD", a 2800/1000, plus a lvl 3 DARK Tuner Monster, and I get a 3000/0 Synchro Monster with no actual effect for my troubles... great. If you got rid of the effect negation thing, or made it target all monsters except "Apocalypto", then this card would be overpowered for its amazing ability to aggro OTK, or 2TK.

 

It would be broken, has very off OCG (so much that it invades the balance of the card), but at least you've done a good job with aesthecity.

 

The second card is too hard to get out (4 monsters is a lot to have on the field at one time), but once he is out, he's overpowered. 3300+2000 (if you have only half your deck left) makes 5300, which is stronger than the Sacred Beast Monsters. It whittles down your opponent's deck with incredible speed, and also brings even more monsters out for 2 discards are 2 Graveyard-to-rfp sacrifices. I'd say this is broken, easily. At least I can understand it, though.

 

You seem to really like high-level Synchro Monsters. My advice to you, though, is to stay away from them. You're only a 2-star member, so I really don't believe that your cards are going to be top quality. Not only that, but higher-level monsters are harder to balance. I know strong monsters are cooler, but making them doesn't improve your ability all, and none of the result is usually any good. Make some lvl 4 monsters, and some lower-intensity S & T. When you start making good low-intensity monsters, then you can move on to powerful monsters and strong S & T. In fact, just stay away from Synchro, Ritual, and Fusion Monsters in general for a while ('til you hit 4 stars), so you can build up experience before launching yourself into cards that are so hard to balance.

 

On a lighter note, you've got a fair eye for aesthecity. I've never liked the looks of Synchro Monsters, but you did well matching the card picture to the card background. Both of the cards are more-or-less good-looking, and you've just got to work on OCG and balance for now. Nice job with what you've already accomplished! :mrgreen:

[Spire]

There great! Only, the text on the pic spoils them.

[Mr. Judgment Dragon]

Pictures look pretty good despite the words in the picture. 8/10.

[Saturn of Elemia]

Pretty cool. Effects are okay. Images are good. OCG needs some work. Some balance issues.

 

8/10 8)

[Infernalhero]

Thanks for the Posts and rates.@NOOB Hunter:I'll try my best,but ever since I heard of Synchro's it's been hard to not stay away from them.I made the mistake on Armageddon(thought I fixed the Conditions).I'll get to work on the effects,Now what you're saying is get rid of effect negation,right?And do you all think I should get rid of the discard effects(Both of em)?I'm going to get rid of the gain ATK points on Armageddon and lower Apocalypto's(or should I get rid of it?).Do you think that the summoning of the Synchro is too powerful?And I thought that the Monster-Lockdown effect would be good and stronger then DAD's,but should I make it an instant rageiki when summoned just I can't Attack that turn,and a few more turns after that?And do you think that the pics should be changed,or is that the aesthecity(I know noobish question,just I 've never heard the word,least don't think I have)and maybe you can help me cause one of you guys could help me with the Synchro's cause I'm trying to make a set and I need more Synchro's?

 

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