Infernalhero Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Hi,I sadly have to start a new set cause mine was moved.But even though I'm going to keep creating cards and I decided to give the Archfiends a Comeback with This Archfiend Deck:Archfiend War.ARFD-EN001[spoiler=Lore]This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type.The owner of this card must pay 1200 Life Points each turn during your Standby Phase(this is not optional).This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set this card can only be Summoned by the effect of "Pandemonium Colosseum".If this card is Summoned while "Pandemonium" is on the Field you gain 1500 Life Points.While this card is on the Field,all effects that include paying Life Points on your side of the Field are negated(except this card).While this card is on the Field no other "Archfiend" Monster cards can be Destroyed.If this card is on the Field when you play "Archfiend's Armageddon" your opponent can not Special Summon or Synchro summon any Monster as long as this card and "Archfiend's Armageddon" is on the Field. ARFD-EN002[spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Played while "Pandemonium" is on the Field.If this card is played while there is at least 1 "Terrorking Archfiend" on the Field,your opponent must discard the top 3 cards of their deck to the Graveyard.While this card is on the Field,all "Archfiend" Monster's ATKs are raised by 500.If "Terrorking Archfiend" is destroyed by battle,you can Tribute this card this card to Special Summon 1 "Archfiend Dragon" from your Hand or Deck.If this effect is used you must skip your next Draw Phase. I hope you like this new card,more will be coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 You've got quite a few OCG errors, mostly being capitalization, spacing, and punctuation. I also don't see these cards really fitting in much with an Archfiend deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 well there's more to come,and now that you mention it,it does to me look more reliant on Pandemonium,if you have any ideas please suggest them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 remove the boarder from the picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Well, you seem to make cards like me. Always trying to fit in a ton of effects for one card. lol I suggest trying to keep to the theme of the main Archfiend monsters. They like to support themselves and protect either the weak or stronger versions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 find a bettter pic with a background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 the pic for the second card doesn't seem to fit in,but still good work overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 -Some OCG errors.-Don't like the pic. Spire's Rating: 6.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 remove the boarder from the picture Which 1 has a border. find a bettter pic with a background You have any ideas. Well' date=' you seem to make cards like me. Always trying to fit in a ton of effects for one card. lol I suggest trying to keep to the theme of the main Archfiend monsters. They like to support themselves and protect either the weak or stronger versions.[/quote'] I don't really understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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