TurdClock Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 eh, here's my first one.... btw, art is NOT made by me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 ocg needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Hmm... If you and your opponent both have a monster on the field then this card's ATK is 2400. One more card and its ATK is 4800 >>;; Your OCG, especially at the end, is off. And a bit of advice: Don't post your first cards in the realistic card section. Nobody is perfect right off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Good effort for your first, keep creating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Some OCG, the pic isnt all that bad, you have the makings of a good card maker just keep workin' at it :) 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurdClock Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Can you post the Effect of the Card up? Can't really read it. "This card's ATK and DEF are doubled for every monster on the field, regardless of position. Its ATK and DEF are also increased by 200 points for every card in the owner's or opponent's hand. You can only Special Summon this monster by inflicting 2400 points of direct damage to your life points. This card is not affected b any continuous or non-continuous spell or trap cards." and what's "ocg"? official card game? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Yeah, OCG stands for Official Card Grammar. If you ask me, the card is really overpowered. And you don't need to say "continuous or non-continuous", just Spell and Trap Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurdClock Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Hmm... If you and your opponent both have a monster on the field then this card's ATK is 2400. One more card and its ATK is 4800 >>;; i didn't really mean to increase it exponentially, but whatever. what's the point of sacrificing 2400 lp if you can only have a piss-poor monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Ye it's overpowered but its pretty good for a 1st card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 good for first time but i think you can get better 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Quite good. Just need to capitalize some things, but not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 That's from a video game. Dawn of Mana I think. Otherwise not bad. 4.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 impressive, but not so muchyour card needs to be balanced - a downside and an upsidenice picturenext time, posts the card lore underneath it so its easier for some ppl to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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