-Stoner-™ Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Here's my Newest Created Card, if there's anything wrong with it, Point it Out, and Try to tell me how to fix it.[spoiler=Effect] When this monster is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Dinosaur-Type monster from your hand. When this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly,randomly send 2 cards from your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Hand isn't capitalized, and I feel it should be something like "randomly send 2 cards from your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard". But I guess it's alright as is. 7.5/10? I'm bad at giving ratings. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Will Fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Made a mistake in my post. Deck is supposed to be capitalized. For some reason, I always forget that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Like the color, you do it yourself? Lower the Level to 6, OCG is a bit off but I like the idea 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Like the color' date=' you do it yourself? Lower the Level to 6, OCG is a bit off but I like the idea 6/10[/quote']Yes, and Fixed It! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 The very end is still iffy, because you started with my idea and ended it with the discarded part. You should just use the whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 There. Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 why is the card yellow not orange? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Overused pic.Possibly underpowered. (Idk)Ok idea.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 why is the card yellow not orange?It's a Light Brown. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 underpowered7/10kinda looks like a vanilla -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 It's not exactly underpowered. When you Tribute Summon it, you get a free Dino. When you Special Summon it later, you get another, and then later still. It all depends on when you use the card, and with what cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Does anyone think i should keep making more cards, or just quit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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