Phanax Leminer Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 This is my first time that I post more than 1 card on this site. Please, tell me what do you think.P.S: Not a 100% English Writer.[align=center] [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 err. there o.k.Grade B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted August 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 err. there o.k.Grade B I know, but I try to make them not overpowerd or too weak. That was sort of difficult. Thank you for the B by the way :). Really appreciate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonxxTamer Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Avarice has the simpliest effect, ever.6-7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted August 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Avarice has the simpliest effect' date=' ever.6-7/10.[/quote'] Simple, but helpful sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonxxTamer Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 But what if your opponent never increase their Life Points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted August 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 But what if your opponent never increase their Life Points? You can always use it to attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Not bad, pictures are ok, and the OCG is good for someone who does know English very well I guess. Ill give them a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAGEDJACKAL Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 that is tight keep up the good work 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted August 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Not bad' date=' pictures are ok, and the OCG is good for someone who does know English very well I guess. Ill give them a 7/10[/quote'] Thank you very much! :3that is tight keep up the good work 10/10 Thank you very much! Oh a 10/10! Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 some excellent pictures - where did you get them from?ocg looks pretty solid and decent8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 some excellent pictures - where did you get them from?ocg looks pretty solid and decent8.5/10 Oh wow, thank you for the 8.5 Dark Knight.I got the pictures on Deviantart.com. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denzel De Lara Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 there good and simple. i like how you made them fair, mostly "sin -gluttony"(that's a little difficult to place it face-up. after ur enemy attacks it, it will be. that's fair and good.). You try to balance or fair both of their card effect and ATK & DEF points. There are somethings that are little overpowered like "Wrath". we all know overpowered cards must have conditions. and the pics are good to, did you draw them? lol, i've been trying to find like those. and your english is not bad. dont worry about it. except the "choice" has to be "choose" hehe. i was going to give you 8 but i think everything is good. so i'll give u 8.9/10not bad for your 1st cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 I spotted several OCG errors scanning through them (sorry I'm too lazy to fix)Pics look good enoughSimple but useful effects 7.3/10Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 some excellent pictures - where did you get them from?ocg looks pretty solid and decent8.5/10 Oh wow' date=' thank you for the 8.5 Dark Knight.I got the pictures on Deviantart.com.[/quote'] Oh teh noes :SImage credit needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OverlordMMM Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 .....those are pretty good effects........and the pics are good matches..... 9/10 ......also, if the first card was reworded to "If your opponent's life points increase, increase you own life points by 1000." then anyone can activate the effect by increasing the opponent's life points......................but the current effect is fine by itself (I just brought this up because other people were discussing the use of the card)...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Not bad' date=' pictures are ok, and the OCG is good for someone who does know English very well I guess. Ill give them a 7/10[/quote'] Thank you very much! :3that is tight keep up the good work 10/10 Thank you very much! Oh a 10/10! Thank you! Im not gonna be rude but thesse are not worth a 10/10 7/10 ill give you my reasons being: There not good enough to run in any deck, id need to be in a deck resolving around def rather then offence Not all pics look liek they fit Like Avarice looks really Squashed.... :P So i mean there not terrible but there not liek omg im gunna use thesse in liek every battle in yugioh i get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Not bad' date=' pictures are ok, and the OCG is good for someone who does know English very well I guess. Ill give them a 7/10[/quote'] Thank you very much! :3that is tight keep up the good work 10/10 Thank you very much! Oh a 10/10! Thank you! Im not gonna be rude but thesse are not worth a 10/10 7/10 ill give you my reasons being: There not good enough to run in any deck, id need to be in a deck resolving around def rather then offence Not all pics look liek they fit Like Avarice looks really Squashed.... :P So i mean there not terrible but there not liek omg im gunna use thesse in liek every battle in yugioh i get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Serenade, youve got it. But hes got a lil bonus as this is his first set. So, a 7.78/10!almost 8! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Serenade, youve got it. But hes got a lil bonus as this is his first set. So, a 7.78/10!almost 8! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StΦr Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Meh. their not bad. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StΦr Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Meh. their not bad. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 The effects are good. There are some mistakes with spelling but thats not a real prob., as you mentioned that you arent the best English speaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 The effects are good. There are some mistakes with spelling but thats not a real prob., as you mentioned that you arent the best English speaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou-Rex Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I like this card's. Good work. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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