-DG- Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 Character Bios(Still working on them)Merik Hihgahsouh----Usual mood: calm and easy goingHeight: 7'3"Shap of body: Very huge and Freakishly muscular, though he can make his muscles look smaller.Shape of hair: Naturally SpikeyColor of hair: Silky SilverEye Color: redish greyAge: 23Facial features: a 5:00 shadow, looks like he is about 19. Very broad yet shaped well. Deck Name: Chronotic Time BombSignature Card: Likes: Naomi Shibotakaiah_________Naomi Shibotakaiah----[spoiler=Appearance(A little mature)] Usual mood: Calm or Attatched to her boyfriend(Merik)Age: 19Height: 5'9"Signature Card:Deck name: Bone Breaker Skull EmpireLikes: Merik Hihgahsouh Shigama Shikotabotsu----Usual mood: Firey or calmAge: 20Height: 6'4"hair shape: straight with a little it of a curl a the tipsBody shape: Medium and muscular. Does not compare at all to Merik's body.Facial features: clean shave. Shaped wellEye color: blueHair color: dark brownRival(s): Merik HihgahsouhLikes: Zina Ikafuji Others will come soon_____________ _______Characters in chapter 1:Merik HihgahsouhShigama Shikotabotsu_______Chapter 1Intro: The Golden League is the greatest tournament of all. The greatest duelists of the world gather and compete in thousands of rounds.This is The Great Golden League!!_______________Shigama, a high ranked duelist, was walking among the streets. He was the top duelist in the world, but a certain duel changed all of it. Merik, a duelist who was accepted into the Golden League, supposedly had no talent, but he truthfully did...Shigama saw Merik and knew that he was a Golden League participant. Shigama: Hey, you!! I challenge you to a duel!!Merik: I accept. I will not lose._______Duel!Merik starts the duel.[spoiler=Field 1 - turn 1 for both duelists] Merik drew his card.Merik: I Summon another "Combination Mecha", and make it and the other into a chronotic compound.Shigama: I summon another "Archterror Skull".[spoiler=Field 2 - turn 2 for both duelists] Merik(Turn 3): I Chronotic Combination Summon "Zephyr Drago-Mech"!Shigama: Then I'll Summon "Shining Dragon"![spoiler=Field 3 - turn 3 for both duelists] Merik & Shigama: ****, We're tied....What will happen next turn? Find out in the next chapter. Thanks for reading._______________________Chapter 2______Merik and Shigama started the duel off like beginners, but both of them had a few tricks up their sleeves. Merik: This duel won't get anywhere with monsters only. I think it's time to Play It Like Pros.Shigama: I agree. It's your turn.... Merik Plays 3 face down cards in the Spell & Trap Card Zone.Merik: I play "Chonotic United Creator".[spoiler=Chronotic United Creator] I pay 4000 Life Points to summon "Blackout Angel Mech MK - 6451" to my field.[spoiler=Blackout Angel Mech MK - 6451]Effect:This card can only be Summoned by Chronotic Combination Summoning or this card's effect. The Chronotic Combination Summoning requires 6 "Chronos Mecha" Monsters. When this card is Summoned, the ATK and DEF of this card becomes 500. During each of your Standby Phases, you can pay 500 Life points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 Points. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points to destroy all other monsters on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card isdestroyed, you can Special Summon this card to your field during your next Standby Phase by paying 1000 Life Points. Merik: I decrease the ATK of this card to 0 and destroy all other monsters on the field.Shigama: You're crazy. You just destroyed a 2750 ATK monster to summon a 0 ATK monster.--Main Phase 2 for Merik--Merik: I activate my 3 face down cards, all are malevolent nuzzlers, and I play 1 face down card in my Spell & Trap Card Zone.Shigama: ****, now I can't destroy it. This will be hard.Merik: You Might Want to hurry up. I will win quickly....I end my turn.Shigama: Finally. Now I'll start winning.--Shigama's Turn--Shigama: I play "Lightning Vortex!!Now your bomb card is gone!!Merik: I activate "Mystical Space Typhoon".Shigama: What?!? Darn, I can't get through his defenses....______[spoiler=Field 4 - Turn 4 for both players] ______--Merik's Turn--Merik drew his card and had a smile on his face.Merik: I play "Chronotic Wipeout".Shigama:*Gulp* What is that?Merik: I'll Show you...heheShigama: I...I...I SURRENDER!!Everyone around: What?!?!?!?!?!Shigama: You win... I saw the grin on your face when you drew, and I knew that it had to be bad for me, but good for you....Merik: Here's what i was going to use to win:*Shows him the card*[spoiler=The card] Merik: I was going to use the card, activate a spell that would increase my LP, use Blackout Angel Mech MK - 6451's effect to special summon him and attack you directly and win the duel.Shigama: How?... How did you think all of this up?!?!Merik: This? This was nothing.. Just a few cards. I ended the duel quickly....Shigama: I... I am no longer in the Golden League or #1... Now you are....Merik: You are the #1 duelist?!?!Shigama: Yeah... I never thought that I would lose....Merik: Oh well. At least you're #2.Shigama: Yeah, but it still won't be the same...FinMerik beat the world's greatest duelist, and has gained many new fans and an excellent reputation. -----Preview of Ch.3-----Merik goes to the beach to relax, but everyone keeps bombarding him, asking him questions and things of the sort. He gets bored and starts to leave, when he feels arms go around his chest. He could tell by the fell that it was his girlfriend, Naomi, who he had not seen in 2 years. This chapter is an excellent one and one you don't want to miss _________Chapter 3 Merik woke up the next day and was feeling a bit bored.Merik: I think I'll go to the beach today to relax.He got up, took a shower, brushed his teeth, and put on swim shorts and a short-sleeve surfer shirt. Merik: I have a feeling today's going to be an awesome day!He left his house and started to walk down the streets.As he walked, he noticed that people started staring at him.Soon, people were all around him, pushing and shoving eachother to talk to him and ask him questions and get autographs.Merik broke out of the crowd, and ran to the beach. There he found a seat and sat down to enjoy the sound of waves. The peace didn't last for long, however. Soon, Merik was once again bomarded with people.Merik liked his own personal space, so this made him feel funny.Merik: EVRYONE, BACK OFF!!As soon as Merik yelled, no one messed with him. He started to get bored after a few hours, so he started to pack up and leave, when all of a sudden, he felt arms go around his stomach, and he could tell who it was by the softness and the feel of it. It was Merik's 19 year old girlfriend, Naomi, whom he hadn't seen in 2 years.Naomi: It's been a long time, Merik.Merik: Too long.... I'v missed you.Naomi: I missed you too. Let's head out of here.Merik: Okay. Where do you want to go, cuz it's already late.Naomi: How about you're house? That sounds fine.Merik: My mansion? That sounds cool to me. I've already eaten, what about you?Naomi: Yeah, I ate a few minutes ago.Naomi and Merik left the beach, and headed to his mansion. By the time they reached the stairs to go upstairs, they were already french kissing, silently, yet sexually.They headed up to Merik's room, and Merik laid down in the bed.Naomi laid on top of him and sat up.Merik slowly lifted her shirt up, and they started kissing again. Merik took his shirt off, and his pants.He then unbuttoned Namoi's jeans.Naomi was red, blushing more than she ever had in her life.She could feel the heat of her own body, and the warmth of Merik's.Merik had already removed her panties, as well as his boxers. Naomi felt even hotter.They both fell asleep about 3 hours later.The next morning, Merik woke up, and look forward, at Naomi, who was cuddling with him on his chest.Merik: Hey, baby, it's time to wake up.Naomi: Okay, just give me a sec.Naomi sat up slowly, but Merik turned her over, and started kissing her. They kissed for a few minutes, then they stopped.Merik and Naomi both took a shower, and got dressed.Merik: I'm heading to M. Corp., do you want to come?Naomi: Yeah, sure.Naomi and Merik rode in Merik's limo to M. Corp., and went inside.Merik intered a code, which he gave Naomi.The code opened a door, which led to Merik's Yu-Gi-Oh! Card Database, or Y.C.D.Merik: I'm going to make a new deck out of my Chronos Mecha Monsters.Naomi: You mean those cards you made up that got made into real cards, which only you have?Merik: Yep, those are the ones.Naomi: Cool. I want to make one too.Merik: I made you one, to the left of mine, on that wall. Put your card box in there, and it'll update all of your cards.Naomi: Okay.Naomi and Merik spent the entire morning doing this, afterwards, they went to the beach, ate dinner, and come home and went to bed.Fin_______--Preview of Ch.4--Naomi and Merik run into Merik's x-girlfriend, who is Naomi's arch rival. Shigama has taken a liking to this girl, and she is an expert duelist. She and Naomi face off in an all out battle. The winner becomes Merik's girlfriend, which was Naomi's choice. Merik had no doubt in Naomi, so he accepted this. Check back in for Ch. 4, coming soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrbishop Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 nice blackblade its great have u read my series Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 thanks, and no, i haven't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 It needs work. Send Kale a PM so he'll check you fanfic out and give some advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted August 29, 2008 Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 It's not the best...Needs work, more description.But I've only read the first chapter.And why are the characters so tall? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Merik is like a freak of nature, yet cunning and irresistable by all girls. Naomi is just tall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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