Judαs Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Okay this is yet another sig of mine, I used a c4d for the first time :)Hope this is better than my previous efforts A dark magician girl sig. Text is a bit messed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Nice, but the filler does not work :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Filler?Sorry, but what would be a filler? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 That weird spotted thing you used on it :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 If I tell you what's wrong you will get better: - Filler (-1) - Choppy Render (-1) - Text Needs A Bit Of Work (-0.5) - Empty Space (-1) Total: 6.5/10 That's just my opinion. problematica would find some more things. It's nice I guess. I was probably wrong about the empty space, but it looks a little empty. If you think I'm being too harsh, cause we're friends then look at it this way: Cyber always thinks my GFX sucks, but I don't take it personally cause it does. I know I'll improve, sooner or later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Render doesn't blend in well (-1)Render not centred (-0.5)Spirit/aura behind render sucks (-1)Depth makes the render look choppy (-0.5)Border doesn't work as a border (-0.5)Massive empty space (-1)Lighting is weird and random (-1)Weird spotted thing (-0.5)Text is an awkward size (-0.5)Sig is an awkward size (-0.5)Background is monotone (-1)Bad use of C4Ds, I can't see them (-0.5)Total: 1.5/10 Edit@Ashje: He hasn't used any types of filler (you even gave him a -1 for empty space >>) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Lol kizzi not all renders have to be centered... and rating isnt really that good.. But he has only been sig making for a week npw and i think he is doing very well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Lol kizzi not all renders have to be centered... and rating isnt really that good.. But he has only been sig making for a week npw and i think he is doing very well...In most sigs, it looks better. Of course he's doing well, he just needs to know some things to fix. Y'know, so he stays at this Skill:Time ratio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Thank you! I always appreciate criticism ^_^Okay I think I know how to improve on most points, but could someone suggest a method to fill empty space? And what's problematica? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Thank you! I always appreciate criticism ^_^No problem' date=' glad you take it in a good way ^_^ Okay I think I know how to improve on most points, but could someone suggest a method to fill empty space?Better positioning of renderLarger render to start withBigger text / fontsThose little image-containing-boxesVector brush once on overlay And what's problematica?http://tinyurl.com/problematica ~Kizzi ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 It depends on the type of sig, centred renders are usually easier to use (which is why my latest sig is dead somewhere) C4d is a bit well just there, they're better when enhancing the flow of the render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 hehe glad some people remember me even though I keep disappearing ^_^ Now let's see:Render should be towards the middleLighting is really messed up, missing the correct 2 directions and going with an easy half-done jobDo not ever do that type of copy that you didIt just looks like the DMG in front of a paperUgly borderReally boring, plain, and emptyThat spotted thing makes it look like the paper background is from a comicText is just plain hideousToo high for a correct sized sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 BAD SIG IS BAD!! N00bish GFX!1.5/10Kizzi was right lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 ^^^ To harsh. no offence, but I know it isn't good in all, but problematica isn't even that harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 ^^^ To harsh. no offence' date=' but I know it isn't good in all, but problematica isn't even that harsh.[/quote'] He's not being harsh, he's being stupid. I think he might be trying to parody my c&c, since I think I remember him once crying over mine before I saw him start posting stuff like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 ^^^ To harsh. no offence' date=' but I know it isn't good in all, but problematica isn't even that harsh.[/quote'] He's not being harsh, he's being stupid. I think he might be trying to parody my c&c, since I think I remember him once crying over mine before I saw him start posting stuff like thisNo Im mocking you because.....I HATE YOU! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 No Im mocking you because.....I HATE YOU! Well, the thing I don't understand is that you're giving reviews that don't even sound like me in the slightest, and yet trying to be like me while not even being on the same level Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 ^^^ To harsh. no offence' date=' but I know it isn't good in all, but problematica isn't even that harsh.[/quote'] He's not being harsh, he's being stupid. I think he might be trying to parody my c&c, since I think I remember him once crying over mine before I saw him start posting stuff like thisNo Im mocking you because.....I HATE YOU! Then STFU and GTFO. Nooblet. =\Can't stand a little critizism? Just stop posting here, please. Spirit, the C4D is meant to interact with the render somehow. You killed it by misplacing of the render, the dots and the copy-opacity thing. Try again and reas some more C4D tuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Thanks For Bringing Peace, And try Gimptalk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Nice sig..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted September 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2008 Well actually I always try to use mewbunny's renders for sigs ^_^;So I'll use different ones now - Planet Renders.... BAD SIG IS BAD!! N00bish GFX!1.5/10Kizzi was right lol. Kizzi was right' date=' but you are wrong. I don't think their comments are bad at all, I need constructive criticism, [i']not flaming[/i] -_-" Spirit' date=' the C4D is meant to interact with the render somehow. You killed it by misplacing of the render, the dots and the copy-opacity thing. Try again and reas some more C4D tuts.[/quote'] Okay thanks ^_^ Better positioning of renderLarger render to start withBigger text / fontsThose little image-containing-boxesVector brush once on overlay Thanks for the solution ^_^ hehe glad some people remember me even though I keep disappearing ^_^ Now let's see:Render should be towards the middleLighting is really messed up' date=' missing the correct 2 directions and going with an easy half-done jobDo not ever do that type of copy that you didIt just looks like the DMG in front of a paperUgly borderReally boring, plain, and emptyThat spotted thing makes it look like the paper background is from a comicText is just plain hideousToo high for a correct sized sig[/quote'] OMG you know sho much 0.oThanks anyway ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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