kiaer corp Posted August 11, 2007 Report Share Posted August 11, 2007 [attachment=4213][attachment=4218][attachment=4217][attachment=4216][attachment=4214][attachment=4215] i put a lot of time into this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supersonic1994 Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Main thing I noticed was spelling errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragons-4-lyfe Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 alot of grammar mistakes and they need to be re-worded 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Wow ALOT OF GRAMMAR MISTAKES 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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