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Beastlord Ryoushi - The Hunter

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Hello!

 

Stealing Kale's format. >.>

 

Random single. Making these 'till my set debut. ^_^ So expect at least 1 a day.

 

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While this card is on the field, no Beast-Type or Beast-Warrior-Type monsters can be Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned. When this card attacks your opponent's monster, flip a coin. If Heads, destroy the defending monster and send it to your Graveyard. If Tails, discard cards from your hand equal to the defending monster's Level. If there are no cards in your hand, decrease your Life Points by the defending monster's Level x 100. If this card destroys 3 monsters by this effect, you can Tribute this card to increase your Life Points by half of the destroyed monster's total ATK.

 

[spoiler=Holo'ed by Spire!]

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Quote

"Who am I? I am a hunter. By choice or by desperation, that is what I am."

~Beastlord Ryoushi

 

Art

Credit is on the card, but image credit is Here.

 

Rulings/Extra Notes

Basically, this card's effect symbolizes that no beasts will approach a hunter, and his chance of getting a catch. Then, he returns his catch to his waiting, hungry family, and collapses. ^_^ This is very overpowered, I realise. Added a cost.

 

Thanks for looking!

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Ok, let me review..

 

-Great art there, sir. If you want, I can holo it for you. Anyway, great art, good job with the pic.

 

-OCG seems fine, sir. Good to see people are starting to know there OCG.

 

-The effect, I like. It suits the card name and pic, which is good. So, uh, great effect.

 

Sorry, my review wasn't that long. Anyway,

 

Overall, thats one great card there and all the best with future cards.

 

Oh, yes:

 

Spire's Rating: 9.4/10.

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Silent Hunter™

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I like it but the effect "When this card attacks" and you flip a coin and it will be Heads or Tails (something to do with the defending monster) .When you said "When this card attacks" the attack can be directly to your opponent so if that happens, theres no use of the toss a coin.

But your OCG is great, the pic is not bad so 9.3/10 :)

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Kyub Newbie

Kyub

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Ok' date=' let me review..

 

-Great art there, sir. If you want, I can holo it for you. Anyway, great art, good job with the pic.

 

-OCG seems fine, sir. Good to see people are starting to know there OCG.

 

-The effect, I like. It suits the card name and pic, which is good. So, uh, great effect.

 

Sorry, my review wasn't that long. Anyway,

 

Overall, thats one great card there and all the best with future cards.

 

Oh, yes:

 

Spire's Rating: 9.4/10.

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Thanks! ^_^ If you could holo this, it would be great, but if I make 1 card a day, as I mentioned, I don't think you'd be able to holo all of them...>.>

 

Awsome card cool pic good effect 9.5/10.

 

Thank you!

 

I like it but the effect "When this card attacks" and you flip a coin and it will be Heads or Tails (something to do with the defending monster) .When you said "When this card attacks" the attack can be directly to your opponent so if that happens' date=' theres no use of the toss a coin.

But your OCG is great, the pic is not bad so 9.3/10 :)

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Ack! Thanks for the rating and advice. It shall be fix-ed!

Um, oops for double post, but Update BUMP! ^_^

Spire holo'ed my card, so it now has 50% more awesomeness! ^_^

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Skyson Newbie

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I like and hate this card a lot. My main deck for a while was Rescue Cat, which consisted of nothing but Beasts. This guy would be hunting all of my cats. D:

 

Anyways, this card is pretty devastating.

 

Beasts and Beast-Warriors aren't too often seen in a lot of Decks. Rescue Cat, Test Tiger, Green Baboon, Ryko Lightsworn Hunter, Wulf Lightsworn Beast, and a few other odd ones like King Tiger Wanghu?

 

That is just an added on awesome effect. The rest of this is very well done. Tossing a coin to be able to automatically destroy any monster this card attacks in a Sasuke Samurai #4-reminiscent style is awesome in my opinion, coin flip effects outside of some Arcana Forces don't compensate enough for the fact that you're relying on even more luck in an already luck-based card game. The auto-destroy effect is very balanced.

 

The drawback is almost too extreme. Attacking a level 4 monster and missing the flip, having to discard four cards from your hand? That's ridiculous, really. You should remove that part completely and just keep the part about losing 100 LP per level if you miss the flip. The potential of losing LP by his effect and potentially losing this monster in the battle on top of that really doesn't need another negative effect (often losing your whole hand is pretty negative) to boot.

 

I like the concept of the monster going to your Graveyard, but it's really not a super relevant effect, since the main revival card of choice (except maybe in Zombie Decks) is Monster Reborn, which pulls from either Graveyard. I assume that when the Hunter leaves the field, the monsters in your Graveyard don't return to your opponent's Graveyard? That is hilarious.

 

The Life Point gain is worded oddly. Does it gain half of the ATK of the third monster destroyed, or by half of the total of all three monster's ATK? If the former, Tributing is totally not necessary. If the latter, then it might be good. I think you could add on that in addition to Tributing this card, you remove the 3 monsters destroyed by the effect in your Graveyard from play. That would make sense with the theme, since the family would be "eating" the hunted monsters, right?

 

Just some suggestions. I really like the idea, it could really turn a duel around if you pull off its effect. A solid, respectable ATK factor and a stable destruction effect with a potentially big LP gain. Very good.

 

 

9/10. Keep making good cards. =D

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This is one of the better singles I've seen on this forum and I don't give much praise to the majority of the cards that are posted here. Skyson is completely wrong in the fact that Beasts and Beast-Warriors are not seen often because the gladiator beast archetype is comprised of beasts and beast-warriors and they are currently controlling the metagame. The japanese metagame also involves rescue cat in combination with X-saber airbellum for quick Synchro Summon and this card would totally put the kaibosh on Gladiator Beast decks. If you added Winged-Beast to it's effect then you can totally shut out GB decks altogether. Quite frankly, I could see this card being mained in 3's or sided to stop the GB's altogether. You would probably see this card used in Oppression decks rather than Teleport-Dragon or Lightsworn but that's perfectly fine. It's got a very respectable attack, which puts it on equal terms with Stratos and the added ability of destroying a monster this card attacks is rather valuable.

 

However, I agree with Skyson in that the discard cost for getting the tails effect is far too costly and may prevent people from using this card. I would think of a different negative effect because losing such hand advantage is too much. However, you may want to clarify whether the discard is a "cost" or a "card effect" because if it's a card effect then it could significantly evolve the dark world-synchro decks. As far as a CCG would go this would totally cripple my set (you can view it in my sig) as well since the key component of the deck is based on beast-warrior tuners. Props to you for creating a card that could potentially evolve the metagame or at least improve an anti-meta deck.

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