Bengal Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 A new card I made, Serpentine Executioner Effect: Once per turn, during you Standby Phase, you can pay 800 Life Points to send one face-up monster on your side of the field to the Graveyard. Depending on the Attribute of the selected monster, activate one of the following effects: -DARK: Remove up to 2 monsters in your opponent's Graveyard from play. -LIGHT: Gain Life Points equal to the number of cards in your opponent's hand x300. -FIRE: Discard 1 monster from your hand and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of the discarded monster. -WATER: Randomly select 1 card from your opponent's hand and discard it to the Graveyard. If the selected card was a monster, increase your Life Points by half the original ATK of the selected monster. -WIND: Each player Special Summons as many level 3 or lower monster from their hand to the field in face-up Defence Position. -EARTH: You can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower EARTH monster from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position. Please comment and rate! (Art credit on the card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Very good, nice pic too 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 it's 'on your field' now, I believe. Attribute is capitalized.1, never 'one'Wind's effect is....lacking"...Summons as many Level 3 or lower...." sounds...wrong. The last part of EARTH...doesn't make sense. Serpentine is already above Level 4, so there's no need to specifically mention it. Very nice pic. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 it's 'on your field' now' date=' I believe. Attribute is capitalized.1, never 'one'Wind's effect is....lacking"...Summons as many Level 3 or lower...." sounds...wrong. The last part of EARTH...doesn't make sense. Serpentine is already above Level 4, so there's no need to specifically mention it. Very nice pic. 8.8/10[/quote'] Thanks, I will edit the card, I made the EARTH effect when I was thinking about making it a level 4, I will take the last part out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Very nice card. No ocg errors, good pic, complex and interesting effect and not overpowered. Good job! One problem is the effect if it's a LIGHT attribute monster; it's underpowered considering the cost. Bring it up to around 300 Life Points per card.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Will do, thanks for the comment and rate :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineteenHundred Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Nice job. Good pic, good effect, good OCG, and good balance. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 yes, yes. yery good. yes...like it! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 OCG is good, pic is nice (not the best ever) but still good, and effects are balanced and intresting, which is odd since I tend to never like those list effect cards who cause the text to go that small. Card Rating: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Not one of this multitude of effects is broken. What else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Thanks for the comments and rates, I'm glad you all like it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 i'd definately use that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 good! i like it much! 9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 nice card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Thanks, i'd definately use that Good to know my card would be usable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 WATER and EARTH are the only worthwhile effects. Summoning Rescue Cat = :] Discarding a card from your opponent's hand with the added potential to gain Life Points = :] All the other effects are really mediocre. 1000 Life Points for any other effect seems way extreme. I'd cut the cost down to, like, 700 or something, really. :/ A decent idea, though. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Thanks for the comments, and Skyson, I undertand your point, I will cut down the Life Point cost a bit, to make the effects more worth while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Cool pic.Effects are nice, and fair considering u must give up LP and a monster.The stats seem fair for an effect monster of its level.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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