Samurai Girl mini set

[Zetsumei75]

Ladies, gentlemen, and children of all ages! Lend me your reviews. I present to you my mini-series of cards. This could blow up into a full 50 card or higher set, if I get good enough reviews here. I know there are some OCG errors on some cards, and I will get to work on fixing those when I get a bit of time. Now rate, fix, and possibly enjoy my "Samurai Girls".

 

Monsters:

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This card cannot declare an attack, or be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. When this card is destroyed by battle, control shifts to your opponent. Each turn this card is on your opponent's side of the field, inflict 500 points of damage to your own Life Points. When you take 1500 points of damage from this effect, you can Special Summon up to 2 monsters with "Samurai Girl" in their name from your hand or deck.

 

[spoiler=Effect]

Samurai Girl Ami + Samurai Girl Naomi

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. Once per turn, you may destroy 1 Spell or Trap card that you control to increase this monster's ATK by 500 until the end of your opponent's Battle Phase.

 

[spoiler=Effect]

Samurai Girl Krystal + Samurai Girl Yuri

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. If you control at least 3 face-up "Samurai Girl" monsters, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

 

 

Spells:

 

 

Traps:

[OMGAKITTY]

Bethany: ATK is high for a 3 star. Make it 4.

Katie: always 1, never 'one', Deck.

Ami: it's ATK/DEF is way too high for a 3 star. It borderlines the 4/5 star range.

you don't have to say 'discard to the Graveyard', simply 'discard'..there's nowhere else to discard too >.>;;

The last part could be worded better, but I don't have an alternative for you.

 

Ashlie: I'd put "This effect can only be activated once per duel" at the end, not the beginning, but I don't think there's anything technically wrong with it where it is...

 

Diana: "This card cannot declare an attack or be Tributed. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon it to your opponent's control. For each turn that this card remains in your opponent's control, decrease your Life Points by 500. When you have decreased your Life Points by 1500 due to this effect, you can Special Summon 2 monsters with "Samurai Girl" in their name from your hand or Deck."

I don't really like this effect.

 

Krystal: again, don't need Graveyard. If it's destroyed, it's going to the Graveyard unless otherwise specified. Level.

Writing in the pic.

 

Naomi: "on your field" or "in your control"

Meh effect.

 

Yuri: can, not may. Deck.

writing in pic again.

 

Chloe: This is fine.

 

Yue: Fine.

 

My browser didn't load the next pic, so I'm skipping that.

 

Chance of the Samurai Girls: I don't like the title. "Roll 1 6-sided die. Draw cards equal to the number you rolled. Special Summon all Level 4 and lower "Samurai Girl" monsters to the field as possible. Discard all other cards drawn."

 

Resurrection of: Meh. Unoriginal effect.

 

Samurai's Greed: This card is fine

 

Defender: Should have a Life Point payment or other negative drawback

 

Sisterly Love: "If your opponent targets a "Samurai Girl" monster, switch the attack to another "Samurai Girl" monster that you control"

 

And finally: How'd you manage to make a set full of girls with swords and miss Shana? D:

 

lol.

[Horu]

your cards are kinda reasonable. kinda cute too. keep in mind that cute cards aren't always low level. for example we can use dark magian girl. she's a level 6 and yet very cute.

[fitz0889]

ITS OKAY BUT A SOLID 8/10