01alim Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 My last card I made before I left this funky place. Now it's back again like I was! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play any number of Spell or Trap Cards on your field. The original ATK of this card is equal to the number of each Spell and Trap Card removed x 900. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, by discarding 1 Spell or Trap Card, you can add 1 Spell or Trap Card removed from play to your hand, OR destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. I DO NOT OWN THE PICI only holo-ed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 No idea who you were/are, but if this is one card you made, I'm sorry you ever left. >_> It's an incredible card that could be easily used to promote massive card usage without worrying about Heavy Storm. A Crystal Beast Deck would laugh with this card. Burn would also have a field day with this, any deck that can afford using up some Spells and Traps. The regaining a removed Spell/Trap isn't really broken at all unless you played it into a Macrocosmos-based Deck, where you can have access to any Spell/Trap you've used thusfar, but being able to trade the retrieval (you removed the S/T to summon him so in most cases why would you want it back) for destroying a Set S/T is amazing. I really like this card. It's even a Winged Beast, so it can combo with that silly little Icarus Attack card. :] 9/10, for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 good eff, i like it! :)in my opinion, try to change the eff grammar in:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play any number of Spell or Trap Cards on your side of the field. The ATK of this card become the number of removed cards x 800 points. When this card destroys a monster, by discarding 1 Spell or Trap Card from you hand, you can add 1 Spell or Trap Card removed from play to your hand, OR destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field."also i would change the atk in 800 instead of 900 :)9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 very nice card. i've seen weaker cards win duels. after all i won a duel with kuriboh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Thanks guys! ^_^ jabura86, thanks for the suggestion, but I'll keep it the way it is. (I like to show off my own creation exactly). But thanks for the support guys. (Skyson you sure do think deep about other creator's cards, lol, I like it). Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Awesome card 01alim 8/10 cool pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Thanks Mech King!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 I like it ^_^ but there are some errors heres a fix just for you to knowCard:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play any number of Spell or Trap Card(s) on your field. The original ATK of this card is equal to the number of each Spell and Trap Card removed x 900. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 Spell or Trap Card and add 1 Spell or Trap Card removed from play to your hand, OR destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field.Isn't it the ATK will be a ?, i added () on s, "by" is kinda outdated its now "you can", fixed the last sentence for ya and BTW you misspelled "destroy", Hope These Help ^ ^ ^Though theres so little OCG Errors (compared to the others >_> ), so i like it. And i agree with Skyson ^_^9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 I like it ^_^ but there are some errors heres a fix just for you to knowCard:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play any number of Spell or Trap Card(s) on your field. The original ATK of this card is equal to the number of each Spell and Trap Card removed x 900. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard' date=' you can discard 1 Spell or Trap Card and add 1 Spell or Trap Card removed from play to your hand, OR destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field.[/b']Isn't it the ATK will be a ?, i added () on s, "by" is kinda outdated its now "you can", fixed the last sentence for ya and BTW you misspelled "destroy", Hope These Help ^ ^ ^Though theres so little OCG Errors (compared to the others >_> ), so i like it. And i agree with Skyson ^_^9/10 Lol (at 'destrioy), but thanks Silent Hunter, I'll keep your fix in mind!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 B-U-M-PThe last card I created before I took a break a few months ago...now it's back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 You don't need the "and sends it to the Graveyard" if you're saying it's destroyed by battle. Everything else seems fine. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 You don't need the "and sends it to the Graveyard" if you're saying it's destroyed by battle. Everything else seems fine. 8.5/10Well some cards have the effect that it is RFP instead...So this ensures that it can only be activated when it actually goes to the grave. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 Take out the comma and OR, change to or, good pic and effect. Change 900, makes it overpowered, to 300. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 An excellent card.OCG has been taken care of by above posts...And Skyson pretty much said everything that needs to be said about it. XDPossibly zoom in on the pic a bit more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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