D.D. Warrior Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 [align=center] This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Black Magic Ritual." This card's name is treated as "Magician of Black Chaos" while it is in your hand. Increase the ATK of this card for each "Dark Magician" and "Magician of Black Chaos" in your Graveyard x300. Once per turn, when you activate a Spell card, you may negate its effect and activate 1 of the following effects: •Gain 800 Life Points. •Inflict 800 damage to your opponent. •Destroy 1 face-up monster with 1200 DEF or less. •Select 1 monster. It cannot attack until the end of your opponent's next Battle Phase.[/align]Art credit is given in the circulation slot of the card. I think the name is teramaster from theotaku.com. Just search for DMG, It's under Fan Art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 OCG is good in some parts, awful in others. The effect is interesting. Being able to turn a spell into LP Gain/Burn or to freeze/destroy a target monster. I like the concept and its consistency with the Dark Magician Girl theme. It's a useful card for the theme, I'd definitely try it out. Good card. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Cool pic but it has text in the right hand bottom corner anyway cool card 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clayclay1928 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 yahn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D. Warrior Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 What do you mean? You just spelled yawn wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 LOL I see my pic XD I am honored! :D The card's effect is very original, but as the others say, needs OCG fix. There's no Magician type, instead, it's called Spellcaster.Btw Black Magic Ritual only works for Magician of Black Chaos, so you might change the effect of this card to something like "This card's name is treated as "Magician of Black Chaos" while it's in your hand or Graveyard". To support DMG and be summonable by BMR, why not? =P If you want, I can rewrite the card with the proper OCG. As for your grade - well, let's say 8/10. I don't see anything wrong other than the OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 All it is, is a Recolored Dark Magician Girl. 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Aren't we all here supposed to rate cards instead of pics, zack12345? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D. Warrior Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Oh! Nice to see you here, I'm sort of surprised. I thought the name sounded familiar. And can you hlp me with the ocg? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fitz0889 Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Great card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 dmg is my favorite female card. make more versions. lol. she looks a bit angry in the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Black Magic Ritual." This card's name is treated as "Magician of Black Chaos" while it is in your hand. Increase the ATK of this card for each "Dark Magician" and "Magician of Black Chaos" in your Graveyard x300. Once per turn, when you activate a Spell card, you may negate its effect and activate 1 of the following effects: •Gain 800 Life Points. •Inflict 800 damage to your opponent. •Destroy 1 face-up monster with 1200 DEF or less. •Select 1 monster. It cannot attack until the end of your opponent's next Battle Phase. (Bullets are now put in the same row as the rest of the text, have you seen Arcana Forces? Also, this might not be perfect OCG, but it's better than it was before, I believe =P Hope I helped. A guy called SilentHunterTM is better at OCG than I am, so you can ask him for OCG help too if this isn't ok.) @grigorirage: Her angry face was a part of the request for that pic =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Love the pic, some OCG errors, love the pic, cool effect, love the pic, and a bit overpowered... cause you can play any random spell card and gain 800LP... 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nekoyuki Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 While I do like the pic, it is, when the day is done, a color swap of a standard Dark Magician Girl. Perhaps you could commission (or simply ask) someone to draw up a true "Magician Girl of Black Chaos"? I've always been a fan of the Dark (Black) Magician Girl. This card is no exception. I do love the change that was only deemed necessary to the Dark (Black) Magician). The effect is interesting as well... However, I have some suggestions: Current Text as it Stands Now:"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Black Magic Ritual." This card's name is treated as "Magician of Black Chaos" while it is in your hand. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each "Dark Magician" and "Magician of Black Chaos" in your Graveyard. Once per turn, when you activate a Spell card, you may negate its effect and activate 1 of the following effects: •Gain 800 Life Points. •Inflict 800 damage to your opponent. •Destroy 1 face-up monster with 1200 DEF or less. •Select 1 monster. It cannot attack until the end of your opponent's next Battle Phase." Suggested Change:"This card's name is treated as "Magician of Black Chaos" while it is in your hand. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Black Magic Ritual". One of the monsters you offer for the Ritual Summon of this card must be "Dark Magician Girl." Increase the ATK of this card for each "Dark Magician" or "Magician of Black Chaos in your Graveyard x250. Once per turn, when you activate a Spell card, you may negate its effect to activate 1 of the following effects:•Gain 800 Life Points.•Inflict 800 damage to your opponent.•Destroy 1 face-up monster with 1200 DEF or less.•Select 1 monster your opponent controls. It cannot attack until the end of your opponent's next Turn." Minor OCG changes as stated above. Also added the effect that Dark Magician Girl is required as an offering for this card (I can tell, there will be OCG changes necessary for that added sentence) and decreased the ATK bonus (slightly). You may want to consider changing the effect about the spells. It makes the card slightly overpowered. As it stands now, it gets a 7.5/10 for slight OCG mistakes and being slightly overpowered. It could be a 10/10 if you just make a couple of changes. That said, I will say again that I love this concept, and would DEFINITELY run this card in my deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 OMG. You Guys Dont Understand. He Recolored a Pic, AND he used a REAL Card in His Effect. [spoiler=My New Rating]-1000000000000000000000000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Alright idea. Meh-ish pic.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Its HORRIBLE. HE IS JUST TAKING CREDIT FOR A YUGIOH PIC THATS RECOLORED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 So what? (and it's DRAWN and colored by me, it's not an existing piece that I changed color. Yes, it looks the same as DMG, so what? Is there a rule that forbids that?)What I don't understand is you, zack12345. What do you mean he used a real card? Rating for zack12345 as a rater: minus infinity/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chibi Zetsu Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 blah don't like it Jabura's wa better plus is wasn't a ritual 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D. Warrior Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 Huh? That doesn't even make sense.OMG. You Guys Dont Understand. He Recolored a Pic' date=' AND he used a REAL Card in His Effect. [spoiler=My New Rating']-1000000000000000000000000/10 Zack12354, Do you know how... Well, I'm not even gonna say it. I personally think Teramaster's art is really nice, and I've never seen this card effect or art used before. If you can show me an exact copy of this card effect, I'll appoligize, but you should probably give Teramaster an appology for insulting his/her art. Anyways, thanks guys. I've gotten 2 reps for this card already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssgohanf8 Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 well how about a third? very nice card ;) go teramaster! i think he means using the name "Black Magic Ritual" in it's name. But if that's not it then he jealous of the fantastic art and effect. way to go :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D. Warrior Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Huh??? Thanks, I guess. Or was that directed to Teramaster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssgohanf8 Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 The pic is directed towards teramaster it's very nice and a great effect too so i think it's a great card :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D. Warrior Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 OH... Now I understand, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Guardian Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 haha are you kidding me?! the pic suxs and i take it none of you have ever seen Jabura's Magician Girl card that is like this and made b4 this one...its not a ritual and the effect on this card is to overpowered 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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