king7586 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 tada http://www.intrepid.com.au/images/christ_the_redeemer.jpghttp://images-2.redbubble.net/img/art/size:large/view:main/1085256-2-power-lines.jpg common people reply please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 1. Capitalize those first letters in words in the card name and in the beginning of a sentence.2. Avoid using "and" to connect 2 sentences into one sentence.3. It's "FLIP:(space)" not flip:pick.4. Ritual monsters need a Summoning condition. And they have NO Flip effects!5. Many many more mistakes... Do you play this game at all?1/10, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Ritual Monsters don't/can't have Flip Effects, yo. Power Line is incredibly awesome for Thunder-type monsters, and I'd honestly use it if it was real. +300 to all Thunders (few and far in between) while being a draw card if it's destroyed. A very good utility card. Other than the bad OCG, the trap card looks great, the other two... so-so. Normal Monster/10 on the first card, 7/10 on the trap, and 3/10 on the Ritual. Learn up on the standards for OCG, then try making some cards again. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Power Line is acually pretty good besides the "and" in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king7586 Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 guys its about the other cards not the dark dragon and thanks dr.pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Don't use real pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Graveyard, ATK, Thuner-Type monsters, good pic, monster need effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king7586 Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 im amazed to see a normal monster card. but i would've appreciated a thunder monster with a really awesome effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Ummm... major OCG erorrs, hate the pics in general... mehh... 2/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGTwtfDXD Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 OCG errors. plz read the OCG thread in realistic cards. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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