black mist Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 This is my second card I ever made.I hope it isn`t overpowered.Also tell me was my last cards decent.I found the image on photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Beast-Warriorbattle, Special SummonBeast-typeDARKWolf Token can only attack...Main Phase, Those are the mistakes I found. Also, use those commas.Very nice card though. Original and balanced effect. (neither OP nor UP) 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 good card, i like it! some few ocg errors.. :)8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Beast-Type (for the Token), Tribute, good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black mist Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Thank you for stateing my OCG errors.My OCG is not to good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 This is my second card I ever made.I hope it isn`t overpowered.Also tell me was my last cards decent.I found the image on photobucket. very nice card. i'd definately use it. also, i an help with the ocg errors if you'd like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the Original Darknight Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Its cool 7.8/10 a Few OCG what am I saying this for i don't know what that means 10/10 there I said it get use to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluepy32 Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 IT WAS OKEY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 how high does the star thing go exactly?on the member meter. not the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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