Zack Blaze Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Hello and Welcome to "Yugioh 5D's : Rise of the Synchros". This Fan Fic Features 4 Synchros in Leo's Deck. [spoiler=Characters] Leo Synchro DeckBrown Hair and Eyes.Record = 2 - 9Leo is new to Duel Monsters and He Isnt Very Good and He Keeps Getting Challenged. And Losing... 'Dino Dude' RandyDino DeckGreen Hair and Blue EyesRecord = 45 - 0'Dino Dude' is the best Duelist in all of Tokyo. He is undefeated. But He Has Just Challenged Leo. [spoiler=Duel #1 - Dino Dueling] "Lets Duel!" They Both Hollered. "I'll go first" Said 'Dino Dude'. "I'll Play 1 card face Down and Hyper Hammerhead in Defense Mode" "Ha that's the best you've got? Ok I'll Play Atlantean Pikeman in Attack Mode! And Ill Attack your Hyper Hammerhead!" "Hahaha! When Hyper Hammerhead is Destroyed By Battle I can put it in my hand. And then play it in Attack mode. And I'll Attack your Atlantean Pikeman" "I knew about Hyper Hammerheads effect. That's Why I played this" "Wha?!?!?!" "Negate Attack!" "No!!!!!" "Yes! Then I'll Activate Destructotron. And equip this card with with it. Fighting Spirit! And with an attack 1900 I'll Attack your Hyper Hammerhead! And I'm not done. I'll Attack your Life Points with Atlantean Pikeman!" 'Dino Dude' - 2300 Leo - 4000 "No! My Strategy! Oh well, It's my turn. I'll Play Magical Mallet. Which allows me Re-Shuffle my hand into my Deck, and lets me draw 5 new cards. Ill play Black Stego in Attack mode. That will do it for me." "Ok, I'll Attack with my Pikeman!" "Hahaha. My Stego's effect allows me to Swich him to Defense mode when he is attacked" "So I lose a lousy 100 Life Points. Anyway I'll end" "Ok, First I'll Play Big Evolution Pill. It allows me to Summon my Dinos Without a Tribute" "No!" "And I'll Play... Ultimate Tyranno!!! And Its effect allows me to Attack all of your monsters! But First Ill play Mystical Wind Typhoon! To get rid of your Spell card... Fighting Spirit!" "No! Not that card!" "And I'll attack with My Tyranno. And now you only have 900 Life Points Left!" "Only 900!?!?!?" "Hahahaha, I told you, you can't beat me!. Now my Black Stego, Finish Him Off!" "No! I Lost!"To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Ive seen better and that isnt much of a chapter, more a single duel, you need to build up your characters backgrounds, personalities ect... and lets face it if the shows were constant dueling then they would suck, but still wel ldone as far as the duel go'sbut Id include the monsters stats, and make the duels a little longer then 2 rounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Im Planning On Doing All That In the Future. Thank You. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 No background.Duel Too short.The reason people don't get very good ratings on their fanfics is because there is no background. That is the main reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Bmp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Make a new chapter, not bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lown master Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 I think i is a good story. i whod love to read more,I run a sychro deck and what you put on you story was very good.Needs some work but good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 Thanks. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted September 29, 2008 Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 I liked it, but It would be awesome if it was a little longer and it showed the characters backgrounds and personalities etc. Overall, 7.5/10. if you follow my steps, 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Cool name but horrible fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Cool name but horrible fan fic.so mean :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vamki Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 I agree with Crystal Beast.Too short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 you haven't made a chapter in exactly 30 days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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