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Robofish

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I don't think they're very good. :( 5/10

 

There's absolutely no spacing, and you need to capitalize Life Points, Special Summon, and Star Tokens.

On card #1 You should say 500 ATK points (instead of 500 ATK).

On Card #2 You should get rid of "The tokens can be used as a tribute for a tribute summon.

 

Otherwise, the effects are AWESOME and very creative.

 

P.S. Always space after commas and periods! Also space before and after parentheses.

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