Bengal Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 A new card I made, but I experimented a bit with the picture (adding a backround, holo, and a render), so try not to be too critical. Ravenous Axe Wielder: Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Warrior-Type monster you control from play. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly and cannot be selected as a target of a Trap Card untill the end of the Damage Step.If you use this card's effect, return it to your hand during your End Phase. Please comment and rate! (Render credit on the card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aniri Wulf Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 thats pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n1ghtm4ze Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 thats pretty good. 10/10. Wow thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Take out the last effect, the direct attack, good pic. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 Take out the last effect' date=' the direct attack, good pic. 6/10[/quote'] Thanks, I have edited the writen out effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Umm, a Tribute Summon is treated as a Normal Summon so the effect contradicts itself, making it impossible to summon. You also forgot the capital T on "Tributing". Besides that, it's a good card.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 need to work on the effect. i am not sure if it is okay to tribute summon a lv 4 monster... or u can write it in another way instead of saying tribute summon.. maybe u can say "This card can attack your opponent's Life Points by Tributing 1 Warrior-type monster on your field" then remove ur the last effect... unaffected by trap and magic is just too powerful for a lv 4 monster... my opinion.. especially when this monster has direct attack nice holo ^^ 6.5/10 edit: KB is right..maybe instead of saying tribute summon, make it special summon.. that makes more sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Hmmm. Tribute Summoning a lvl 4 monster. = NO Try saying this instead: This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Warrior-Type monster you control from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 good card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks for all the comments. I have edited the card according to your input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 Warrior-Type monster you control. Fix'd The order of that part of the effect was off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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