Yankee Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 I made this card for a contest a week or two ago, and lost because I did not happen to save this version of the card. If you where in this contest and are reading this, you know this would have beaten you ;) So, without further ado, here is my "new" card, "Dragon of Fertile Life" [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, place 1 "Life counter" on this card (Max 5) Once, during your Standby Phase, place 1 "Life counter" on this card. Once per turn, when a monster you control would be destroyed by battle, you can remove 1 "Life Counter" from this card to negate the attack. Once per turn, you may remove 1 "Life Counter" from this card and place it on another monster you control. During your Standby Phase, if there is a card with a "Life Counter" on it other than a card with "Dragon of Fertial Life" in it's name, increase your Life Points by 200. If there are no "Life Counters" on this card, it is destroyed. Please rate and comment. Cheers,Yankeefan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JesusofChaos™ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 My good sir, this card is certainly balanced maybe underpowered. Now i must back away from my keyboard because the axe men we discussed are coming into my room and i only have time to place my hands over my bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 My good sir' date=' this card is certainly balanced maybe underpowered. Now i must back away from my keyboard because the axe men we discussed are coming into my room and i only have time to place my hands over my bottom.[/quote']Oh my. What a perdiciment. You must take the first opportunity to run in the the same direction in wich that particular man appears to be going, for you will not be caught that way. Protect your bottom at all costs my dear friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Change ATK and DEF to 1600, change level to 4, good pic and effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thank you for the post Cobra. I will concider your opinion for some changes ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Hmm, tricky, it may be like a BIT underpowered.Increase ATK and Level a bit and its good ^_^ Perfect OCG as always :DGood card Yankee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thank you very much. I have 2 votes now to up the ATK and level, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 "can" not "may" :P Other then that I like the idea. It helps to keep your Monsters safe and it MUST have a Life Couter to survive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks man, thank you very much for posting ^_^ Got a rate? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 People usually complain if I give a Numerical Rate. So i'll give you a 450/500 (9/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coinsu Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 yes more atk and def. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks James, tho..Whats wrong with number rates?? I like them xD And thanks caoinsu, but, would you like to say anything else about the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssgohanf8 Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 it's pretty good 8/10 if you change to a higher level and attack I'll give it a 9/10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 lol, allright, thanks. I'll think about changing it in a bit ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 i love this effect, really. the game is good too. i am really counting on its life ^^ 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Nice. A bit underpowered, I guess. You should probably up the attack so it doesn't get annihilated right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Nice card, the picture and the name fit nicely together. The OCG is good, but you forgot a period at the end of the first sentence. I like the effect also. I second raising its' level to 4 and giving it a bit more ATK. Nice work 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Allright, thanks for the posts everybody. I will raise the ATK and level soon. Probably when I wake up tomarrow. Thanks everybody ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Nice card, like the Life Counter thing, good OCG, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Thanks, glad you like it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coinsu Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 now that i think about it, it has a good effect 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 I think you can shorten the OCG to the following. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, place 1 "Life counter" on this card (max 5). During your Standby Phases, place 1 "Life counter" on this card. Once per turn, when a monster you control would be destroyed by battle, you can remove 1 "Life Counter" from this card to negate the attack. Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Life Counter" from this card and place it on another face-up monster you control. During your Standby Phases, if a monster you control has a "Life Counter" on it (except this card), increase your Life Points by 200. If there are no "Life Counters" on this card, it is destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Thank you very much for the posts.I will concider the changes Killey. Thakns for the hard work ^_^ Anybody else? ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 i remember when u made this card in a contest. u made alot of OCG mistakes on this card. but you`ve fixed it. I give u 9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 i remember when u made this card in a contest. u made alot of OCG mistakes on this card. but you`ve fixed it. I give u 9/10 :)This was the card that should have been entered before >_< Thanks for the real rate ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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