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My new pack: Rise of the Archer PLEASE RATE & CRITISIZE Why doesn't anyone read it?

marksmanaim

By marksmanaim
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Should I keep going?  

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  1. 1. Should I keep going?

    • YES!!!
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    • yeah.
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    • Don't care.
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    • no.
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    • AHHH IT BURNS US, KILL IT WITH FIRE AND HOLY WATER!
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    • =3
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marksmanaim Newbie

marksmanaim

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Hard to read effects

 

Marauding Archers:

This card cannot attack unless there is a card with "enchanted arrow" in it's name on the field. When this card is summoned add 2 spell counters on it. If this card is sent to the graveyard, you can remove a spell counter from it to return it to the field with half of it's previous ATK.

Vilhelm lv 6:

This card cannot attack unless there is a card with "enchanted arrow" in it's name on the field. If a monster with an ATK of less than 1500 is selected as the target of a spell, trap, effect, or attack, redirect it to this card. If this card is destoryed due to it's effect, you can search your deck for one "Vilhelm - The Protector Lv 8

Vilhelm lv 8:

This card cannot attack unless there is a card with "enchanted arrow" in it's name on the field. If a monster with an ATK of less than 2200 is selected as the target of a spell, trap, effect, or attack, redirect it to this card. If this card is destroyed byits effect, search your deck and summon a "Vilhelm - The Gaurdian Lv 10".

 

 

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Steven Cope Newbie

Steven Cope

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AHHH IT BURNS US, KILL IT WITH FIRE AND HOLY WATER! That my friend is lol material.

 

Anyway back to the cards. They are very nice though some pics lose points due to no backgrounds. Also Holy Light's pic is kind of weak. Also when u mention a card name in the text use capitals, so example: card with "Enchanted Arrow" in it's name. Also Phases have capitals at the start of them and Summoned/Graveyard should have capitals as well. Also Mercenary Bowman: Level 4 with ATK:2500 / DEF: 2200, that's a bit high.

 

God that was my biggest review on here ever. I'm going to stop now so I can take a break. Though note besides the mistakes, good cards. Its mostly just OCG errors.

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