Chaotix® Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Thanks guys, but I have just lot inspiration for this... Nobody comments :( Now I ask again and I would like a truthful answer please... Is this worth continuing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Chao, your kidding, right?Of course you should continue this!Also happy b day, and if you order anything in my new shop, for you it's free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Chao' date=' your kidding, right?Of course you should continue this!Also happy b day, and if you order anything in my new shop, for you it's free[/quote'] I'm afraid to say I'm not kidding... And Thank you, that truly means lot me :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 I'd think from all the positive comments you're getting that it's definitely worth continuing, I'm pretty sure the words 'keep it up' might point in that direction at least XD... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Chapter 2 Nearly up :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 I want this to continue. . . And. . .I. . .want. . .chapter. . . two! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiver Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 i can tell it is good by the title i should knowi love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 nice second chapter this fan-fic is fast developing into a faveorite, let me know if you ever need help with this one, mine fell through cuse I worked to hard on a concept, then couldnt build on it, and was to stubourn to change it XD Shouhei's D-Wheel was now only meters behind Wrench's D-Wheel. you didnt need to say D-wheel that last time, the subject of the sentence was already established so ...behind Wrench's would have suficed, thats about my only issue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 "Come on kid! Let's get this pathetic game over with!"shouted Wrench missed a space with "shouted Wrench apart from that, no errors i noticed... Great job! Can't see anything that needs editing. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 lol You noticed that!? Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Excellent conclusion, certainly a pretty anime-style victory and I like the sound of this Lotus Dragon XD... The effect of this stays active for 1 of my Battle Phases, and 1 of yours! his card halves the ATK of all monsters on the field, but each monster can attack 2 times during the same Battle Phase!" I expect you meant to say This here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Thank you TotalObelisk :)I tried to make the duel as anime-ish and epic as possible. I'm glad you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 WOW, your awesomer every day!Like, this is how the ranks of the fanfics i ever readed:1.Kale's, your's And kales was voted the bet fan-fic of 2008! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 This is very interesting ^_^ I greatly enjoyed it, and I want it to continue ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Wow Thanks guys :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 I just realised, if you want a very chalanging opponent for this kid GK or End of Anubis would both suffice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 True :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 I just realised' date=' if you want a very chalanging opponent for this kid GK or End of Anubis would both suffice[/quote'] Nice episode, very cool and a nice way to get him out of trouble - very nice way to Synchro from the Graveyard. But I must ask 1 question: > What card is GK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Grave Keepers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 1 word for this fan fic... Overated. *No storyline *Duel pretty boring and bland *Character creation doesn't even exist *Very random *The cards are random' date=' and do not flow at all It's about time someone came out with the truth. Sorry it had to be me.[/quote'] You really think so? Half your statements are invalid, since the fic just begun... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast user J Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Awsome Fan-Fic Chaotix, but it would be even better if it had card images or links to the cards. That is just my idea though. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 1 word for this fan fic... Overated. *No storyline *Duel pretty boring and bland *Character creation doesn't even exist *Very random *The cards are random' date=' and do not flow at all It's about time someone came out with the truth. Sorry it had to be me.[/quote'] That can be said of a lot of fan-fic when they just start. Of course the cards are gonna be random, they've only just made a debut, and if you want detailed character back stories in the first episode then you have no sense of storyline. Although I'll admit your accusations aren't without reason I'd wait a few episodes before you start badgering it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 I've deleted my post. You are correct, I did judge it too early. I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 Thats ok. Chapter 1 and 2 have been updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Ok I've read it & I must complement you on a good job there. Since it's only the beginning where the characters are just showing up, not much is expected, but it's still great from here. I think you could put in a few emotional moments for the characters when the plot comes in & everything starts going crazy. It can really spice up the story in very good ways, as shown in the TV dramas I've watched. The duel is great, you even put in the duel field system that I reckon Kale once used earlier on. You also highlighted the cards used so that people would what it is, I've seen several Yugioh anime reviews doing that too. It allows people to tell what the card's type is. I see that you are doing the Speed World thing & need a lot of associated cards, (the Speed Spells & others) I suggest you post something on Written Cards or Realistic Cards about your fanfic cards. (I suggest Written Cards for the job) Anyway, I wish you best of luck in making this fanfic & I'll guide you to the finish line. Just keep writing in the way you think is best for you & also do double-checking to find errors. I also thank you for thinking that I could help you out in this & hope it actually does in the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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