StevenBray Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Rate, Comment and Criticize. Thank You! Also since I've never made a card that could be added to an already existing Archtype, give me your impressions on how it would fit in with the rest of the Archtype. Effect: The controller of this card pays 600 Life Points during their Standby Phase (this is not optional). During your Standby Phase, you must roll a six-sided die. Depending on the result, apply the appropriate effect: 1 or 2 - This card's name is also treated as "Pandemonium". 3, 4 or 5 - This card cannot be destroyed in battle and all Battle Damage inflicted on you is halved. 6 - Switch the Battle Position of this card, and if this card is destroyed by battle while in Defence Position, inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points. Pic Credit: http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/DarkLord.jpg by wolfberserker (his image gallery in Showcase). Note: A couple of things:1 - I'm not sure of the wording because some of the effects I can't remember being on any other card before, but if it has please provide the card name so I can learn 2 - I'm not sure if it is OP (overpowered) or UP (underpowered), so if you could give me your impressions and ways to fix the OP or UP I would appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Usually a 1 star has about 100 - 500 ATK, this card should be at least a 3 star (this probably isnt vital). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Usually a 1 star has about 100 - 500 ATK' date=' this card should be at least a 3 star (this probably isnt vital).[/quote'] Given significant drawback, a Level 1 monster could have 3000 ATK. But none the less, your right about how it should be higher Level and it will be changed post haste Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 good card, the OCG is correct and the effect is medium orifginal. good job. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 It is pretty good, pic is just a little bit too cartoony. Great job! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
personman Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Shouldn't the first 2 effects be "for the turn in which this effect is activated"? Also, do any of the archfiends have effects that depend on "Pandemonium" being on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Shouldn't the first 2 effects be "for the turn in which this effect is activated"? Also' date=' do any of the archfiends have effects that depend on "Pandemonium" being on the field[/quote'] 1 - I figured just forcing the card's controller to flip a coin once per turn would be easier and save space on the card (since it's pretty cramped as it is) 2 - http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Pandemonium < there is the card pandemonium, and (for information) all "real" Archfiends have a Life Point cost, and this (along with one other help ability) prevents the Life Point Damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Never write (this is not optional). Rewrite it like this: The controller of this card must pay 600 Life Points during each of his or her respective Standby Phases. If you cannot, this card is destroyed. You can change the second sentence to whatever you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Never write (this is not optional).Rewrite it like this:The controller of this card must pay 600 Life Points during each of his or her respective Standby Phases. If you cannot' date=' this card is destroyed. You can change the second sentence to whatever you like.[/quote'] It is written (this is not optional) on all of the other "Archfiend" monsters that have a cost on their effect > http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Imprisoned_Queen_Archfiend < that should cerfice as evidence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Hmm. Oh well. Carry on then. (I don't really play with Archfiends.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 archfiends are boring and useless since you basically fry your life points away. they're even worse if your opponent runs a burn deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 archfiends are boring and useless since you basically fry your life points away. they're even worse if your opponent runs a burn deck. Right so that's a problem with the Archfiend type, but you didn't comment on the card - you just b****ed and moaned about the type. Just because you don't like Archfiends, it doesn't mean the card is bad too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FireGirl87 Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 haha pretty good card and very interesting pic to say the least XD lol overall 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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