Cin Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Classifiers:Blood Rose, 「κδㄨ」, Still Growing In the Thread:<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>><><><>Hello there Graphic Designers. This been thought over and we decided to make for you a classification thread where we can classify you more than 100+ time [with different Tags or Large Pieces each time><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>Post What you want here to get a:A. CriticismsB. ReasonC. What you are Happy Classification guys and girls. Warning:DO NOT POST ANY ART WORK THAT CONTAINS NUDITY OR PORNOGRAPHY. POST YOUR STUFF ONLY, NOT OTHER PEOPLE'S ART. How to be a Classifier: You have to give really good criticism not list of stuff you have to work on. If you think you are up to it, send a Personal Message to either me or 「κδㄨ」 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 ohhh just what i need to get better =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 [align=center]At 3cchiFr3ak: Colors are not bad[depending on what program you use]However there should be shades at least on HER left side. The hair seems good, but not well detailed. You need to draw more lines on it to detail it well. The colors on there are very good. Let's leave the head and above for a moment. Now for the main body. The chain looks stuck to her stomach. Try to make the rope she's waring a bit out of her neck, for example, try to fold it here and there. The hands are nicely done. The legs are good. The rest is good. I think you did well for this piece. You are a a Low Moderator <-----> High Moderator[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 [align=center]At 3cchiFr3ak: Colors are not bad[depending on what program you use]However there should be shades at least on HER left side. The hair seems good' date=' but not well detailed. You need to draw more lines on it to detail it well. The colors on there are very good. Let's leave the head and above for a moment. Now for the main body. The chain looks stuck to her stomach. Try to make the rope she's waring a bit out of her neck, for example, try to fold it here and there. The hands are nicely done. The legs are good. The rest is good. I think you did well for this piece. You are a [b'] a Low Moderator <-----> High Moderator[/b][/align] *bows* thank you. =D but what's that about, the low mod <-----> high mod thingermijiger? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 That's your level Buddy ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 That's your level Buddy ^_^ is that good? O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 It's not bad because it's an artwork ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Artwork =/= Formal GFX lol. These are really based more on the person...But lol more than what I expected from you o.O... Eh... Kinda messed up on this one..Vector sig (forgot to clean up the render)Most recent real sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Here is one that I have been told was my best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 need some advice with what to do for the legs and feet/shoes. oh and her name's Kousagi ("Bunny" in japanese X3) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 [align=center] Mind if I do this? Why is she like a right angle? That isnt natural :/Also' date=' the torso is slightly longer than it should be, even with your apparent style.Her back buttock is larger than her front? WTF?! Its alright imo, but even someone who does what I like to call Gothic Anime style drawing has size consistency [/quote'] No I don't mind. If you wish to join too then I suggest you pick a piece of ART and personal message me your criticize. =D As for you sir, let me clear it up well. You have detailed it well enough. However the hair is not detailed enough, you need to add more detail to it. From the hip to the legs. The hip was detailed well until you started scribiling a bit. The chest is not bid enough compared to the legs and bottom[i'm serious] so try to make it a bit bigger. You have the same rating. You use this style too much I think. try to detail everything well. I'll get back to you Icy.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 [align=center] Mind if I do this? Why is she like a right angle? That isnt natural :/Also' date=' the torso is slightly longer than it should be, even with your apparent style.Her back buttock is larger than her front? WTF?! Its alright imo, but even someone who does what I like to call Gothic Anime style drawing has size consistency [/quote'] No I don't mind. If you wish to join too then I suggest you pick a piece of ART and personal message me your criticize. =D As for you sir, let me clear it up well. You have detailed it well enough. However the hair is not detailed enough, you need to add more detail to it. From the hip to the legs. The hip was detailed well until you started scribiling a bit. The chest is not bid enough compared to the legs and bottom[i'm serious] so try to make it a bit bigger. You have the same rating. You use this style too much I think. try to detail everything well. I'll get back to you Icy. The hair does not always have to be more detailed than the body. But you did raise a wealthy point. So instead of killing the whole smooth thing s/he has going here, I have a better suggestion that wouldn't require too much of a rework... Why not allow the hair strands to fall a bit more closer to her body and have the front lock of hair a bit more flared at the bottom? That should cover up the sense of detail and keep the piece's integrity intact along with the style...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 [align=center] Mind if I do this? Why is she like a right angle? That isnt natural :/Also' date=' the torso is slightly longer than it should be, even with your apparent style.Her back buttock is larger than her front? WTF?! Its alright imo, but even someone who does what I like to call Gothic Anime style drawing has size consistency [/quote'] No I don't mind. If you wish to join too then I suggest you pick a piece of ART and personal message me your criticize. =D As for you sir, let me clear it up well. You have detailed it well enough. However the hair is not detailed enough, you need to add more detail to it. From the hip to the legs. The hip was detailed well until you started scribiling a bit. The chest is not bid enough compared to the legs and bottom[i'm serious] so try to make it a bit bigger. You have the same rating. You use this style too much I think. try to detail everything well. I'll get back to you Icy.[/align] ah the scribblez. lol needs ta get fixed. ohhh i purposely made her chest that small... and i just started this style i think... i'll need to start detailing as you say.. but sometimes i think i go too far with them lol.. ^^ anyway thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 [align=center]Some Styles need more work on the details, that's what my mentor told me. I think if You would give it more detail then her face will appear on what she is. But still Mr.Icy has a point. [good job sir] At Icyblue: GIMP Signatures, these should be interesting to criticize on. They are missing the Depth concept. I'm pretty sure you know what depth is by now, right? [make me proud >.>]Tag number one:I don't really like the flow because it's all here and there. Try using 1 Cinema 4 Dynamic and blur the others a bit. The effects near the sword are off since they are not above it. They are giving the signature a hard time to realize what's going around in the surroundings. Either remove them or add them above the sword and erase some spots. The render seems over sharpened. The lightning near the sword is "I like" Tag number two:I'm guessing brushes?For a vector-style signature, it's a bit plain since there is not glow or anything moving over the render. Vectors are always shiny and happy. For example. If you sketch the sun. You will add those lines coming out of it, that's a vector shape. And you will use lighter colors for it to glow, correct? Anyway, it's a bit dim and boring. Try to use more glowing effects on it. Tag Number Three:There is no real comment on this one. I would only think two will solve it. This is pretty nice for GIMP. Anyway, Try using a Level/Curve/Lightning effect near the door the light's coming from so it gives a nice feeling to it. The flow is not bad but I would definitely erase some parts of it. That's pretty much it. Hope to see you getting better,sir.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
High Definition Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Here: Please tell me strait up. And class me ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 I should have been told about this =\ Anyway i guess i can help you with this right Blood Rose? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Me and Kox make joint decisions on this, so its best to pm him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 he'll say yes so you can add me >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 When he's physically said it to me, then I'll do it. Not until then. He's not on msn atm, probably a while I see him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
High Definition Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Ok umm can someone rate the signature? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 [align=center]High Definition: Let's start. Your Depth is really low. You need to give this style more depth so the original shapes appear. Depth is when you can see a focal more than anything else, you must add to it more adjustment layers to realize this style. The background must be at least smudged on the focal so it feels like the black thing on him is coming from the background too. There is absolutely no lightning. Look at his eyes. It looks like day time. Why didn't you re-color it or fix it before starting the Tag. Lightning should come from down to his face. Remove the fog between his hands, it's distracting every thing at the tag. Don't just throw the text at the bottom, use normal fonts and make it different. Your level:Beginner <------> High Beginner[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 I really worked hard on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
High Definition Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 [align=center]High Definition: Let's start. Your Depth is really low. You need to give this style more depth so the original shapes appear. Depth is when you can see a focal more than anything else' date=' you must add to it more adjustment layers to realize this style. The background must be at least smudged on the focal so it feels like the black thing on him is coming from the background too. There is absolutely no lightning. Look at his eyes. It looks like day time. Why didn't you re-color it or fix it before starting the Tag. Lightning should come from down to his face. Remove the fog between his hands, it's distracting every thing at the tag. Don't just throw the text at the bottom, use normal fonts and make it different. Your level:[b']Beginner <------> High Beginner[/b][/align] I got rated High Novice on this. Hmm oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Flaming Pl0x:Don't give me anything about the double focals, I know about them. I heard enough about 3 months ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 [align=center]High Definition: Let's start. Your Depth is really low. You need to give this style more depth so the original shapes appear. Depth is when you can see a focal more than anything else' date=' you must add to it more adjustment layers to realize this style. The background must be at least smudged on the focal so it feels like the black thing on him is coming from the background too. There is absolutely no lightning. Look at his eyes. It looks like day time. Why didn't you re-color it or fix it before starting the Tag. Lightning should come from down to his face. Remove the fog between his hands, it's distracting every thing at the tag. Don't just throw the text at the bottom, use normal fonts and make it different. Your level:[b']Beginner <------> High Beginner[/b][/align] I got rated High Novice on this. Hmm oh well. Novice = Beginner And Kox, do you need help or not =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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