Malibutide Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 I thought I would take a stab at making a card. edit - I decided to make some more cards. I thought I'd go ahead and try for a set, since that seems to be popular, and it looked fun. This was my first card ever created. I thought I'd make something unique and powerful, the result was Doom of Exodus.I decided to make an "Exodus" set of cards, so this was my second attempt at a regular card for the set.A Trap card for the set, I found the picture and immediately started thinking of a card to make for it.I'm not quite sure if this card is OP'd, but I thought it was a really cool idea for a Trap card, I tried to name it accordingly.The Mother of the whole set, Exodus. I tried to balance it a bit, and I went ahead and tried for a combo set, tell me what you think.And this is the combo for Exodus, tell me what you think. Hopefully I will be updating my post regularly, so check back every so often. Any and all help is appreciated, and thanks for the ratings so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 pretty good for your first card 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdiddy Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Yeah I agree with Tyler1095 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Era Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 actaually thats a pretty good card.. very nice 8.5/10 and great pic reminds me of doomfire, keep working on them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malibutide Posted August 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Thanks, I appreciate it guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Wow! Nice job! First Card? Wow looks like your an expert. Not extremely good though. But just surprised for your first try. Only a few mistakes in the description. Nice job. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Very well done.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da bom Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 how do you post cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 good job for the first try. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 cool. nice job or your first try. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malibutide Posted August 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 I added two more cards. Tell me what you think please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 9/10.Theres a few grammar issues,but its all good :P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galaxyman Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 wow, doom of exodus is awesome, where did you find the pictures? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malibutide Posted August 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 Found the picture on google images believe it or not. The rest of my pictures I have pulled off Deviantart so far. Thanks for the comments guys, I look forward to making some more cards. This is really fun, and if anyone would like to give me some advice on the grammar, you can tell me on here, or pm me. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 Very good 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malibutide Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 I added a couple new cards, I probably messed up on the grammar a little bit, and I hope I didn't rush them too much. Rate them, and please leave comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kallan Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 The OCG (Card Grammar and Wording) is a little off, but it's not bad. The last card isn't that good. Try "battle" instead of "Combat". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Nice. If they were real cards, I'd buy em'. 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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