Brian Rameriz Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 The first 5 cards I made please rate me and comment, thanks. Oh and by the way the first 2 you might've seen before because I was really bored :P http://allempires.com/empires/huns/Arm.jpg http://abandonedrealms.com/realms/classe...arrior.jpg http://www.thelasvegasadventurer.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/01/walking_with_dinosaurs.jpg http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n71/JisushikaRAWR/Dragons%20and%20more/Dragons/Dragons20-20Solstice.jpg http://karynlewis.com/Art/SnowBeast600.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Put the names in the effects in quotes some capitalization errors (Deck, Graveyard, etc) may = can one = 1 Damage Calculation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 purty good for a newbie ^_^Correct OCG(I believe) for all of them:#1: When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. #2: This card cannot be equipped with an Equip Spell card. When this card is destroyed as result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 "Persian Soldier" from your Deck to your hand. #3: Equip only to a Beast-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 400 ATK and can attack twice every Battle Phase. At the end of the Damage Step of a turn the equipped monster attacks, pay 800 Life Points. If you cannot, destroy this card. #4: This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card is the only card on your side of the field, draw 1 card. #5: This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. If this card attacks while in Defense Position, apply the ATK of this card for damage calculation.8/10, for good job ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Well Pretty good for a n00b, good job! 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Rameriz Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 k i'll change it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardTimeNow Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 This are pretty good for your first cards. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain246 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Wheres the other 2 cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Rameriz Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 no the first 2 are the ones that i posted before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Those are some pretty good cards. I give 9/10, 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Actually, Demented. . . Damage Calculation, as it is shown on many of my real cards. . . is damage calculation, without caps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Okay ocg. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 wow. i must say you have potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 There better than my first 5 cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 i like 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lil Jevans Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Sweet cards! You'll go far in the ranks of card makers if you keep this up. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Nice cards and he is not a N00B! No one goes around telling poor newbies they are noobs. Epically if you use it with a icky 0, not a o. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Not bad for a newbie...okay overall...6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Rameriz Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 thanks everybody, i'll work on my ocg and hopefully get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.